All Comments on 'Love Storm'

by MarySymes

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ben_kiwiben_kiwiover 10 years ago
keep it up.

good beginning to a series here

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great Potential...

You can develope this story in many ways; why not all of them? Sister-sister, mothe-daughters, father-daughters. All individually and as groups.. Continue the tale of tails. Thank you.

montanamcneilmontanamcneilover 10 years ago
pritty good

Good now make sequil

JackM30ffJackM30ffover 9 years ago
short but sweet

Would like to read more of these two.

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