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Refined Adjustments Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/22/13

Is she bipolar? I'm so confused by her!

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by ariesgirl08/22/13

Yup she appears to be bipolar big time. There are so many unanswered questions with this story. Jerome isn't helping any by telling her things about Johnny. I know he is protective of her but he need to let her handle the relationship. He can step in if Johnny hurts her. But it seems she is hurting Johnny with the hot and cold behavior.

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by Anonymous08/22/13

Lost

Ok I'm lost what the hell happen?

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by CoCoNiy10108/22/13

She's actually crazy hahahaha

Nesca has random outbursts of extreme attitude-ism lol. Before she kicked them both out, I had to reread and make sure I hadn't missed anything because it seemed too out of place. Not feeling her. And Johnny is supposed to be a college professor but strikes me more as a 19 year old from the streets haha. He doesn't really have the maturity level I was expecting. But will continue reading.

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by Anonymous08/22/13

WTF

Did anyone understand this crap

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by Soft101708/22/13

Lol Entertaining To Say The Least

I am a little confused but keep it up! I want to see where all this is going :)
Nesca kind of intrigues me lol

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by fawnsage08/22/13

So...a little confused

What's going on?

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by GamerGrl407708/23/13

What??

So this girl seems certifiably crazy. Hoping her outburst and relationship with Rome is explaimed. I will definitely keep reading.

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by Anonymous08/23/13

This is genuinely confusing. Perhaps some of the story was deleted?

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by Anonymous08/23/13

really confused

Is she psycho or something? Like wtf?

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by Anonymous08/24/13

Soooo

It was interesting while it lasted but ur heroine is too wishy washy for me. This story seems so unrealistic.

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by Anonymous08/25/13

yelling with a smile on her face

Is she bipolar, schizophrenic or what? Interesting sucks to have to wait to find out

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by Anonymous08/31/13

Im confused like wtf

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by Anonymous10/11/13

WTF ?

Bipolar much ? This was confusing ? I thought they were happy now but out of no where she shits herself and freaks out for no reason ? Hopefully next chapter will clear it up ..

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by mrskelley10/19/13

What's up with her?

I need to know what's really going on? Love the story though!!!!!

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by chocolatesista12/15/13

She is so wishy washy

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by ApplejuicexD09/05/14

!!!

She Bipolar as fuck!!!

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by Anonymous09/23/15

Very confusing and a bit incoherent, this story has the potential to be so much better... Please try again!

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