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Don't Eat Cookies In Bed

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by Anonymous

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by HarryHill08/07/13

You are pretty good

at closing a poem. :)

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by Ashesh908/07/13

mmmmm

scrumpilicious !!!!!

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by Angeline08/07/13

Simple, sweet and sexy

what's not to like. Yep, I remember these poems and I like how you're sharpening them up. :-)

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by GuiltyPleasure08/07/13

I'm glad....

...you've retrieved these poems and the heightened gloss is good making them even better.

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by OpenField08/14/13

Very nice.

The poem does not overburden the metaphor, which is nicely presented.

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