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All Comments on 'Approaching old age'

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HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
You old butterfly you

:)

NeonuroticNeonuroticover 10 years ago
Really, a brilliant comparison

With a well deserved E and easy to 5.

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
Yup you deserved it!

in just a few words you told a story that is also a metaphor. Excellent! :-)

TzaraTzaraover 10 years ago
Congratulations on the E, m'dear.

My version would be:

Cracking joint.

My orthopedist opens

his checkbook.

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