Why is it that you are too scared to show who you are? If your comment don't try to save face and hide behind an anonymous tag. Also, if you didn't like it just read another story. I'm sick and tired of these bitch ass anon's critiquing everyone's work when they are too damn scared to put out any of their own work.
To the author I enjoyed your story and I do hope that you continue to write and ignore the nay sayers
This is NOT my "day job", and i am not writing to impress anyone. I am just trying to contribute to the community by not only being a "taker" (reading material) but also submitting.
I have no problem with constructive feedback...some of which I might incorporate (because, again, this isn't my day job - I am not trying to make a living as a erotic fiction writer, so this isn't me "practicing my craft" or any such thing)>
You can tell a lot about a person but what they say anonymously - the internet is the battle field of little minds and people who find they have a lack of "victories" to be proud of in the real world...and their favorite weapon is to lay claim to a superior intellect then that of all they survey....
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Why is it that you are too scared to show who you are? If your comment don't try to save face and hide behind an anonymous tag. Also, if you didn't like it just read another story. I'm sick and tired of these bitch ass anon's critiquing everyone's work when they are too damn scared to put out any of their own work.
To the author I enjoyed your story and I do hope that you continue to write and ignore the nay sayers
Thanks "Thickntasty"...
...I agree with your sentiments exactly.
This is NOT my "day job", and i am not writing to impress anyone. I am just trying to contribute to the community by not only being a "taker" (reading material) but also submitting.
I have no problem with constructive feedback...some of which I might incorporate (because, again, this isn't my day job - I am not trying to make a living as a erotic fiction writer, so this isn't me "practicing my craft" or any such thing)>
You can tell a lot about a person but what they say anonymously - the internet is the battle field of little minds and people who find they have a lack of "victories" to be proud of in the real world...and their favorite weapon is to lay claim to a superior intellect then that of all they survey....
Good stuff...
Watch the point of view, but keep it up!
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