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Enjoyed it
Thanks for the offering.
Unreal
I can't believe that some alien fuckwit has captured cpete's erotic brain and submitted this piece of absolute "definitition" crap unworthy of his many other contributions!
If it wasn't some alien soft-dick inducing wanker invading his brain, then I hope that this is a one off!
To whoever is responsible - please release the "real cpete" and never let this sort of shit deny us the horny stories we've come to enjoy from cpete.
cpete - if this is a "born again" new direction of your literary chosing - then . . .It's a real fucking SHAME!!!
-0/5 Total CRAP!!
ZZZZZZzzzzz.....
Wow, what has happened to you? Your last few stories have been troublesome. First plagiarism, and now this.
Seems someone is suffering from clinical depression.
Your anatomy lesson was so boring I fell asleep snoring.
ZZZZZZZZzzzzzz.....
C'mon cpete wake up!!
Your all Idiots
These are the stages of a divorce. Get it right. This is what happens if you never have been through one. Take it for what was said. Unless you of course were the cheater making these comments. then your like the 75% who make excuses for lying to ones spouse, forsaking all others, love honor and cherish. You idiots don't believe in honor, commitment. So guess what you are all Phonies. Nice job cpete. 5
Not sure this was a story with an ending.
However, cpete is definitely one of the best poster on this site (far above the mob; if in doubt look at the trash posted today). Gave it 4-stars (usually cpete gets 5-stars).
I'm not sure what the posters are angry about
These are simply the stages of grief applied to the dissolution of a marriage because of infidelity.
different
But I liked it.
Guess not enough wacc cucky shit for the haters to be happy :)
An Excellent
reading of the mind and turmoil
OneBrainCell
"stages of grief applied to the dissolution of a marriage"
How is that a story you ignorant fuck?
Reviews and Essays maybe, but amoeba like OneBrainCell and the other insecure ignoramuses only care about living the cuck-life (being cucked, divorcing, then finding a new gal to get cucked by), fucking wankers.
4 stars because it isn't a story
But it is what usually happens in a marriage where infidelity is discovered.
A dialogue more than a story
Interesting but not as captivating as your stories. Maybe alittle more meat behind the stages. They need something to flesh them out not sure what but something
I think some of the critics
don't understand that this is an installment in a series. Check out cpete's stories page, and realize that he IS a good writer and can write very complex stories. This was more than just an outline, it IS part of something bigger. They aren't chapters in ONE story, but instead , installments in a series. The website SHOULD provide links to the other's, but won't since the title isn't shared throughout the series. Check out cpete's other stuff, it has been a while since he wrote regularly on this site, and I (for one) am happy to see ANYTHING new he posts. This site needs all of the competent contributors it can get, so I say " WELCOME BACK!"
cpete = talent
What's with you nay sayers....Cpete wrote great stuff..try Blood from a Turnip series.
He is off in another direction...respect talent when you read it...gets a 5
Needs some editing but not bad
Ramen (noodles), not "Rommen." She would never betray me (not "betrayal me"). 'Til death do us part, not "To death do us part." Probably a few more in there somewhere. But I liked it, as something a little different, original, fresh way of portraying the hurt resulting from infidelity. Like the five stages of grief. Thanks for writing this.
Not a story at all......
More like a self help guide.
One thing is telling
This assumes that divorce is the ONLY option...that the man can find another woman/family and that Reconciliation is a dream.
No, more people get over it than don't.
WTF
WTF was this? Just as ball players slip in performance as they get older, evidently so do writers, this is a mere shadow of his past writing. What a shame, he was good at one time, it's sad to see shit like this. Just sad.
Part 3 of Anatomy of a...
My bad for not including in title this Story was the final installment in the Trilogy of the "Anatomy" series (Begining with -Anatomy of an Affair, Anatomy of a Cheating Divorcee and this final Anatomy of Husband cheated)
Thanks for Reading and Posting(both good and bad)
I beg to differ FD45
more people don't get over it, they learn to deal with the constant wondering, some just don't care enough to give up half their crap. Few take the high road and claim to forgive and forget. They feel it's for the bigger picture, a happier family or the kids will be better off with both parents. That is until it happens again, then they feel like fools for not cutting their losses when they had the chance. "SO", the question is which one is the husband going to be, from the sounds of the story. He picked the logical choice. Cut you losses and move on.
huecuck is the expert on cuckoldry
He's been cucked every possible way, even his cat cucked him hard. FD45 needs to listen the expert and defer to huecuck's vast experience in being a cuck.
UNLESS THE WORLD IS SQUARE
one can never choose surroundings and fill-ins. TK U MLJ LV NV
Another great story by a great writer
Knowing that the end of this chapter has already been determined in previous chapters, the author presented the agony and the changes a simple regular man goes through in the case of betrayal, the man presented is not a rambo who claims that what happened has done nothing to him and he can move on and put all behind very easily, such men give you the impression that they never loved their wives or they never invested themselves fully in the marriage. The story didnt also present the weak man who considers cheating as a minor mistake that can be discussed and forgiven because he actually find it too hard to move on alone and he is ready to take anything and everything just to keep the illusion of happy life. the format and characters of the story is the same used in the earlier chapters and it was simply an anatomy not a real story. NOW, for the comments, cpete, allow me to comment on a couple of comments here. The author here is presenting a view, an idea, and as readers, we are allowed to agree or disagree and present our views and ideas here, this is what FD45 and Huedogg did here, as for the others who have nothing but hate inside them and no real views to discuss, you should know that others can see the venom and rage in your words, and this can only indicate one thing, you took some very bad decisions in your life. Anons, be brave enough and admit that you were a coward to leave a dead relationship, be brave enough and admit that you are a coward to set up an account so people will at least have a username to address when replying to your hate filled comments. Again, great story for a great writer.
The best
I have read in a long time. *****
You left one out, junior
the most primal of them all:
Revenge
brutal, politically incorrect, and often lethal
the bloody vengeance of a man betrayed
all you listed here is stuff to make gutless cucks feel good about their lack of balls.
Anon who wrote: "You left one out, junior" Whatr are? 16???
You know nothing about human relationships.
When you start to sprout hairs, when your balls drop, when you become a man, then you can comment. But not until. You loser.
cpete's story is the story of the truly betrayed.
What is courage
Many who just bash writers about their stories, calling them weak, gutless, cukes, etc have no idea what real life is about or what a real man is. They are the TRUE weak and gutless hiding behind false bravado, especially when they have to spout it about a "story" that is all imagination.
Well done
Raw hard truth! This tells it like it is. Most of us on here like to read, and write about fanciful payback on a cheater, but this is pretty much dead on as anyone who's gone through it can attest. Thank you for writing this and sharing.
I can not rate this
This isn't a story: it's a cut and paste of psychological phases and impacts of infidelity.
I don't mind homages. I draw the line at a rewrite. This could have been the basis of a nice story...but a story involves characters, plot, settings, timelines, and conflicts.
Where is that here? This is not to dismiss the information. But it is not a story.
This is hardcore.
No, not REVENGE hardcore. This is hardcore Truth. Granted, I was "lucky" in the past when my former fiancé cheated on me, in that we weren't married yet, and I was able to avoid some of the last few items on cpete's list. I've gone through the gamut of emotions, though. Everything under the sun, and dealing with the deaths of my grandparents was easier, as bad as that sounds. I do consider myself lucky today, however, that I'm married to the lady with whom I'm going to spend the rest of my life. :)
5 HUGE Stars for this one.
I totally agree with the comment of FD45
He said EXACTLY what I was going to say. This was not a story, but it could have been an introduction to a good story, basically just fleshing this out, with plenty of dialogue and emotion. 3 stars.
Interesting
A great instructional tale. How long does it take to get to the indifference mode? I'd really like to know.
Wrong Category!
I enjoyed the discourse. Several 'stages' were short-changed, such as the 'Confidence' stage, but overall, not bad at all!
Nonetheless, this is NOT LW!!! Sorry, it simply is NOT! Maybe it will be read MORE in this category, but the same might be true if the title were changed to 'Everything You Need to Know About Sex!'
What, then, category? Perhaps the category (oddly-included in LIT) - Non-Sexual, or the How To? But NOT in LW!
No rating...but no reflection on quality.
Very Interesting Presentation
Three separate slices of the Anatomy of a failed marriage. I like reconciliation stories but that is what they are. The true story is that unless you never really loved your partner, you are destroyed. Maybe half the affairs do not lead to divorce but they certainly ruin the relationship that existed before. I found it interesting that only one commentator worried about revenge.
Not really a story.
This is more a clinical explanation of what really transpires after a cheating spouse.
Not a loving wife story
Just shows us how to adjust to a unfaithful spouse. More like a documentary . Good none the less.
Well done cpete
you've attracted a cluster fuck of sad cucked non-men. Many of them have favorited the story. A zillion stars for a true rendering of the American male. Class.
Too fucked up to comment on...
ONE STAR!
This is not a story
I don't know what it was --but a story wasn't it. I kind of expected more since you haven't written anything in months, I'm sad to say that I gave it a 1.
Good start
A good outline of a story. I like the delineation into obvious stages, but I think each stage should have been fleshed out more with characters and specifics. Maybe a short scene consisting mostly of dialog could exemplify each.
Thanks for the post.
"sad cucked non-men"
cpete pandering to them since they don't have real lives and spend all their free time reading and commenting about cheating wives - hell, they've all admitted to being cucked at some point and reliving it vicariously through stories floats their boat.
Grow a pair
'Nuff said
Real Life
Yeah no matter how tough you think you are, Family Court will reward cheating bitches with half of everything and give custody of the kids to the cheating skank. To those who say grow a set of balls remeber this, the Family Court does not care how tough you think you are. Threaten or use violence and you end up in jail and it does not change anything. Kids are the innocent victims and a wronged father has no rights.
Thanks cpete for a dose of real life.
Very simple.
Simple dude. Just hang your dumb ass up the fucken tree.
interesting
Cpete, I do agree with those who thought this should have been posted in essay's & reviews, until I read your explanation that this was the third installment of your "Anatomy" series. Now it is in context.
For those who were so offended by the author's writing style for this third chapter, I gotta ask, did you read the first two installments? Plus, I notice a common complaint among reader's comments is the repetitious stylism of many stories.
Hey guys, in case you haven't noticed tab A goes into slot B. Voila! Sex! Yeah!
All other sex stories are plagiarism of that sentence.........
Cpete is at least trying something different, for good or for evil. An experiment in minimalist writing. Love it, Like it, indifferent, dislike it, hate it! It's okay to make your own choices, your own decisions about your own preferences.
I hope Cpete will continue to post stories here, even though I have not liked every story he has posted, it is my opinion that he is one of the regular posters who I will keep coming back to, whatever I opinion of each new work.
Patchs
The best way is to find the cheating wife`s boyfriend and bash his balls in with a baseball bat. In the dark of night nobody knows.
ARE ALL THE GOOD INTENTIONS
supposed to help or hinder the recovery. TK U MLJ LV NV
"What happens when he finds out?"
NOTHING!!! To be a CUCK/WIMP/WHORE WIFE APOLOGIST writer ... you can't have the husband do anything ... accept go back to the closet .....and ask "cpete" if there's room in there for two!!!!
Why the hate?
What's the last anon's problem? They can't hold your jockstrap in writing, I'm sure, and are distressed that they had to put words they couldn't figure out into the little tea cup that is their brain. Takes a bit more than a mental midget to figure out where this story fits into your other work. 5 stars.
WOW
Some pretty strong comments about another's reaction to infidelity. I can't help but feel sorry for some of those anons. If this fictional story triggers that type of emotion then they are in desperate need of some therapy which isn't a bad thing but their reactions are just screaming for help. cpete, another great emotional portrait of a wounded individual of infidelity. However, in most cases anger is used by individuals that don't properly know how to deal with the pain of loss where they have no control and feel helpless. Anger gives them that feeling of control which is an emotion that is a lot easier to deal with than helplessness. Case in point, a lot of your anons' comments. By swearing and ranting profanities at you it gives them that feeling of control when in actuality this is your story and you are in control. Personally, when someone rants at me as a form of feedback I rarely consider it and as I mentioned earlier feel sorry for them. They need Help. Thank you for another nice tale.
Great Trilogy
Sounds almost like a been there; done that.
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