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by jpz007ahren08/13/13

Nice start.

Please continue writing. And don't forget the sex-crazed antics when the females break protocol, or have it broken for them xD

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by snowgirl71408/13/13

GREAT START!!

This was a great start. You have captured my attention please continue, waiting on the next chapter.

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by clive_iluvnyc08/13/13

yummy.

excellent start. hope to see more. Thanx.

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by dilettantish_reflibrarian08/14/13

very interesting

I am really looking forward to more, please go on!

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by bloodandsand08/14/13

excellent start

more please. I am being greedy but longer chapters too. yes, I ask for the moon. lovely story and I can't wait to read more. 5 stars

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by Anonymous08/14/13

good start

Good start!

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by claireacquired08/14/13

This is really good!

It's hard sometimes to find stories that really capture your interest. So many seem like a re-hash. Your story, on the other hand is fresh and new. I can't wait to see where you go with it. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous08/15/13

You have me hook, line, and sinker!!! I can't wait to read more, don't keep us waiting long. Five big ass stars!!!

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by Anonymous08/16/13

More More More!

So many directions this could go in - I can't wait to see how the story acutally unfolds!

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by Anonymous09/08/13

I'm Hooked.

It's been several weeks since your initial submission. Please don't keep us waiting too much longer for your next chapter.

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by Anonymous11/04/13

Longer

I hope that the next story will be longer because its taking so long for you to post a new one.

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