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by Anonymous08/13/13

Grammar!

Most writers change to a new paragraph when the subject changes. Each sentence in your writing contains multiple subjects, making it difficult to read. Quotations still escape you, as do other rules of grammar. Please take a few classes in English writing skills!

Fewer stories, of higher quality would be a good idea.

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by Anonymous08/13/13

Re: Grammar

Always some 'teacher type' popping up. Read it for what it is-- not an English essay!

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