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Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 11

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by Redmoon_Elz08/14/13

Finally

someone tells her she's being stupid! I love the story thanks for the quick updates

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by Anonymous08/14/13

Like it

Really, really like it. Way too short. It is irritating how short the chapters are.

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by Anonymous08/14/13

enjoying your story

I really like this story so far will b looking for an update

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by emj41708/14/13

hate to say it, but...

me thinks Leif should try again and then move on.

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by Cherrypeach08/14/13

Move on already!

Thank goodness for Janelle!!! Lynne has gotten on my last nerve; her fears are understandable, but for a "church girl", she has zero faith in herself or anyone. It would be nice to read that some of her issues were caused by herself. Just because she is immature doesn't mean she should be this damn indecisive and/or stupid.:-/

I enjoy this story a great deal, but I agree with another commenter that it does seems like it is stuck on one note with Lynne. Keep up the good writing. :-)

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by Anonymous08/19/13

omg

Lynn is getting on my last got damn nerves with her issues

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by Anonymous04/14/14

maybe if Lynn was so bored with this story as I am, she would do something

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