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Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 13

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by fawnsage08/16/13

Oooooo-Kayyyy

So started reading at ch. 11 and I'm hooked. I like a funny hit steamy romance....but not mice.

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by bensyaya08/16/13

Slow moving

Overall I like the story but its a bit slow moving. Maybe you could do 2 pages instead of one. And Lynne is starting to get slightly annoying but I guess that's because she is so naive. But keep up the writing because I am still reading.

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by emj41708/17/13

she had better take this chance

and tell him what he needs to hear--they can take it slow and get to know one another. If she pushes him away, Leif will start sleeping around and that will be THE END.

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