Great story! Great read! The author made the sexual tension build slowly which really paid off near the end! I wish more erotica was written this way! Great work!!
by
Anonymous04/21/04
great
would love to read more like this mabey the next one joel and his friends could all do her at the same time a fantasy of mine for my wife
by
Anonymous05/06/04
Loved it
Can't wait for the folow up to this story -- It was great!
by
Anonymous10/18/04
TOTALLY AWESOME!!
I have had a full body massage that was sexual.
You brought back sooooooo many memories for me. I am ready to go again!! Your descriptive writing had me coming few times during the story.
I look forward to reading your stories........thanks
by
Anonymous11/09/04
Really luscious...
It was perfect. I agree with the other guy that you should have finished the story with you and the wife confronting her after the massage I believe you can still do it. But it is a great story. And WHERE IS THE FOLLOW UP THAT YOU MENTIONED IN THE STORY. Thanks..
by
Anonymous01/15/05
Wow! What a tease!
Oh My Goodness! I think I've soaked the computer chair through! I really liked how you kept the story building up; one of the best teases I have ever read! Thanks for the sleepless night!
by
Anonymous01/15/05
Ho Hum
I'm sure the author won't mind that I skipped from page one to the public comments assuming this was another of the usual masseur ends up fucking the wife while husband watches and masturbates. Don't any naormal males write on Literotica. The number of stories that have the wife being fucked by friend, employee or whatever while the husband gets off by watching are amazing. Why did these guys bother getting married? They can get a porno film a lot cheaper than a wife. the disgusted Ct. Yankee
by
Anonymous01/15/05
fuck i need a massage too
that was cool . wow i wud luv a massage like that. hope my hubby is listening
by
Anonymous02/08/05
HOT HOT HOT
That is one of the Hottest stories I've read for a while. Keep them cummin'~~~~~
by
Anonymous02/25/05
wow!
Incredible, simply incredible! Fantastic buildup!
by
Anonymous05/07/05
One of the best!
One of the best stories on this site. Your writing and the way you slowly expose Kate is so hot.
Would love to see you write more like this.
by
Anonymous05/31/05
wow
thank you for a really hot well written story.
by
Anonymous08/08/05
Amazing
Definitely one of the very best stories on this site!!! The only suggestion I have is to spend a little more time on the actual sex act itself. The story was built up really well, but I just felt like the climax was a little rushed and it wasn't described as well as the massage itself was. The ending was alright but a little more elaboration wouldn't hurt either.
I know I'm being really picky, but it's only because you show so much potential, and your story is excellent!!! Seriously...it rivals the sex scenes of 'professional' romance novels.
by
Anonymous08/23/05
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!
I've been reading here for several years and that is the hottest story I'ver read. Especially being true. I wonder how mad my wife would be if I did that, or will she love me more? Anyway, wished you'd have told how things went after they got home, and does she know he did this. If you have more, baller72001us@yahoo
by
Anonymous09/14/05
GGGRRREEEAAATTT
great... i loved it soo much i read it .. then read it again just to enjoy myself a second time. would have liked to see the wifes face if hubby was standing in the doorway and things concluded. wow..
by
Anonymous09/15/05
HAVE TO AGREE WITH THIS COMMENT
IN REGARDS TO ALL STORIES WHERE THE HUSBAND GETS OFF WHATCHING HIS WIFE FUCKED BY ANOTHER MAN. I'm sure the author won't mind that I skipped from page one to the public comments assuming this was another of the usual masseur ends up fucking the wife while husband watches and masturbates. Don't any naormal males write on Literotica. The number of stories that have the wife being fucked by friend, employee or whatever while the husband gets off by watching are amazing. Why did these guys bother getting married? They can get a porno film a lot cheaper than a wife. DISGUSTED
by
Anonymous09/22/05
perfection!
I love the process of seduction and this story was absolutely perfect. I couldnt imagine a much better story :)
by
Anonymous10/21/05
Another spineless wimp
A male who needs to get off by watching another man fuck his wife is less than a man and doesn't deserve a woman. And a woman who allows this to happen is a whore with no self esteem or personal worth.
The Baron
OMG , That was such a hot story, where do I book my massage ?
I truly thought that was one of the best stories I have read here.
Thankyou.xoxoxoxoxoxoxEmma.
by
Anonymous11/14/05
One of the best here
I have bookmarked this story as one of the best ever at this site. Just came back and read it again after a long while. As good as the first time
by
Anonymous11/21/05
WOW !!!
WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW !!! - what a great story !!! - It took me a week to read your wonderful story as I kneaded to stop and rest at various times to catch my breath and regain my strength (if you know what I mean !!!)- I am a massage therapist and wish I could go to a school of sensual/erotic massage and learn a few of the techniques described in your story - keep up the good work and let me know if your wife wants to help an amateur turn professional!
by
Anonymous12/02/05
There is only one thing better
The only thing better than watching your wife get a THOROUGH massage is masturbating while watching and then sliding your penis into her spermy (and hopefully fertile) cunthole and enjoying her for yourself. IT is truly fantastic!!
by
Anonymous12/02/05
More
Still waiting for more from you ....great writing and i have cum many times to this story. I have this same fantasy to do this with my wife
by
Anonymous12/31/05
Great Story
This is one of the best massage stories, and you have done an excellent writing job among other things, do write more such stories.
by
Anonymous02/15/06
wow... that was awesome! 10 out of 10!
probably the best story i have read here! makes me want to do the same with my wife.
thanks for the story you wrote! it truely is one of the best here.
by
Anonymous03/06/06
Age no factor!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Believe it or not, I'm 78 YO and got it off twice. Wow, what a story!!!!!!!
I love massage stories and this is one of the better ones I've read. I can't believe you were able to make it five pages long and still be so good, that's impressive. I'm not big on the husband sharing the wife, but that didn't keep me from enjoying an incredibly well written piece.
by
Anonymous04/27/06
A Great Fantasy
I loved this story. It coincides nicely with my own fantasies for my wife. I plan on reading it again, with her, in bed one night soon. I'm sure if she reads it, I'll be in for a great night of hot sex! Thanks Bilbo
by
Anonymous04/29/06
wow
Wow...what a page turner! Hot and steamy....I could feel the heat and smell the oil.
Great job!
Jane
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Anonymous05/01/06
YUMMY!!!
I am completely envious of your wife... My husband would undoubtedly never set up anything like that for me. I thoroughly enjoyed the story, thank you so much! I came twice just reading it!!! Thank you!!!
Quite possibly the hottest story I've read on Literotica. The way it was told -- and the patience in getting to the heart of it. I felt like I was getting the same teasing!
I also liked all the teasing talk about her ass -- making us think that "one last thing" would be popping her anal cherry with him -- and yet you held that back. Great stuff.
by
Anonymous06/25/06
Just Great
Made me wet.
by
Anonymous07/06/06
TRUE EROTIC
This is really erotic enough,and also very real to me...
by
Anonymous07/31/06
Reread and reread
My favorite, the only literotica story I reread over and over again. I only wish I could do this for my wife -- and watch while she gets done so slowly and so sensually.
by
Anonymous08/01/06
Best ever
Best story on this or any other site. Theres a missive reason for that you take time to set the scene and her inhibitions slowly fade away as she is caught in lust! Pure classic!!
by
Anonymous08/07/06
hottest yet
I have been secretly reading many stories without my boyfriend's permission. He would die if he knew I was getting off on these stories as I dream of other men and women and we don't even have SEX yet!
This is the hottest story I have read and I have been reading and looking at pictures now for many months.
VERY HOT
by
Anonymous10/05/06
WOW - thanks!!!
WOW - very arousing story. Phantastic work! Keep it up! I am dying to read your next story - thanks!!!
by
Anonymous10/05/06
Ohhhh Boy!
I think I have orgasmed more more while reading this one story than all the other stories on Lit I have read put together. Thank you , thank you, thank you....cant wait to read more..
you write very well. You don'r rush the story. You teased us the way Joel teased Katie. I cant wait to read your next story. I hope it is more about Katie.
It was very erotic Well done
I don't usually flame stories, but I don't see anything positive about this one. Wimp Hubby pays Super Stud $200 to give his wife more orgasms and better sex than he can... as an anniversary present no less... sounds like a plan to me... NOT. Unless, of course, he really wants out of the relationship because he has somebody else and he's setting slut wife up to ditch. Maybe that's chapter 2 - he pimps her out in a crack house and takes off with somebody else.
by
Anonymous12/12/06
Wish my husband would give me this gift!
Even better ... if it "came" from him in person ... so to speak. Very fine writing and sexy as hell. Well done!
by
Anonymous03/15/07
Yessss!
one of the signs of a truely gripping erotic story is the author's ability to hold the reader at the edge by slooowwwwly building up to the final countdown. bilbo181 has definitely captured this effect and has written one of the very BEST stories ever, here in Literotica. please try to find the time to write another!
by
Anonymous03/28/07
Don't understand gatorhermit's antagonism...
"Sorry, I don't get this one 12/07/06 by gatorhermit in usa
I don't usually flame stories, but I don't see anything positive about this one. Wimp Hubby pays Super Stud $200 to give his wife more orgasms and better sex than he can... as an anniversary present no less... sounds like a plan to me... NOT. Unless, of course, he really wants out of the relationship because he has somebody else and he's setting slut wife up to ditch. Maybe that's chapter 2 - he pimps her out in a crack house and takes off with somebody else." . . . (this was quoted from gatorhermit below)
What would cause gatorhermit to lurk around these cheating wife stories and read them??? Must be coming from a lot of pain to punish himself this way... His comments do pave the way for an interesting turnaround for another story. It would be totally a good plot for the cheating husband to set up his totally proper wife for a big fall with the scenario that gatorhermit sets up. irchristo@yahoo.com
This was an excellent story, well written and planned. My only disappointment is that I checked to see what other stories you had written and saw that you hadn't submitted since 2004. You have the talent, you should use it! Once again, thank you for the excitement and the buildup to truly sensual pleasure.
Was it really a true story, or was that part of the buildup?
English
amazing story
write more like these!
Outstanding,
Truly outstanding. What a present. What a wonderful husband.
Excellent Job! Hot Story!
Perfect! I wish you finished with the husband confronting her with what she did and the response!
Tension
The build up in this story was truly incredible. God.
anniversary cummin up
i would love love love a gift like this:-)purrrrfect
Outstanding!!
Great story! Great read! The author made the sexual tension build slowly which really paid off near the end! I wish more erotica was written this way! Great work!!
great
would love to read more like this mabey the next one joel and his friends could all do her at the same time a fantasy of mine for my wife
Loved it
Can't wait for the folow up to this story -- It was great!
TOTALLY AWESOME!!
I have had a full body massage that was sexual.
You brought back sooooooo many memories for me. I am ready to go again!! Your descriptive writing had me coming few times during the story.
I look forward to reading your stories........thanks
Really luscious...
It was perfect. I agree with the other guy that you should have finished the story with you and the wife confronting her after the massage I believe you can still do it. But it is a great story. And WHERE IS THE FOLLOW UP THAT YOU MENTIONED IN THE STORY. Thanks..
Wow! What a tease!
Oh My Goodness! I think I've soaked the computer chair through! I really liked how you kept the story building up; one of the best teases I have ever read! Thanks for the sleepless night!
Ho Hum
I'm sure the author won't mind that I skipped from page one to the public comments assuming this was another of the usual masseur ends up fucking the wife while husband watches and masturbates. Don't any naormal males write on Literotica. The number of stories that have the wife being fucked by friend, employee or whatever while the husband gets off by watching are amazing. Why did these guys bother getting married? They can get a porno film a lot cheaper than a wife. the disgusted Ct. Yankee
fuck i need a massage too
that was cool . wow i wud luv a massage like that. hope my hubby is listening
HOT HOT HOT
That is one of the Hottest stories I've read for a while. Keep them cummin'~~~~~
wow!
Incredible, simply incredible! Fantastic buildup!
One of the best!
One of the best stories on this site. Your writing and the way you slowly expose Kate is so hot.
Would love to see you write more like this.
wow
thank you for a really hot well written story.
Amazing
Definitely one of the very best stories on this site!!! The only suggestion I have is to spend a little more time on the actual sex act itself. The story was built up really well, but I just felt like the climax was a little rushed and it wasn't described as well as the massage itself was. The ending was alright but a little more elaboration wouldn't hurt either.
I know I'm being really picky, but it's only because you show so much potential, and your story is excellent!!! Seriously...it rivals the sex scenes of 'professional' romance novels.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!
I've been reading here for several years and that is the hottest story I'ver read. Especially being true. I wonder how mad my wife would be if I did that, or will she love me more? Anyway, wished you'd have told how things went after they got home, and does she know he did this. If you have more, baller72001us@yahoo
GGGRRREEEAAATTT
great... i loved it soo much i read it .. then read it again just to enjoy myself a second time. would have liked to see the wifes face if hubby was standing in the doorway and things concluded. wow..
HAVE TO AGREE WITH THIS COMMENT
IN REGARDS TO ALL STORIES WHERE THE HUSBAND GETS OFF WHATCHING HIS WIFE FUCKED BY ANOTHER MAN. I'm sure the author won't mind that I skipped from page one to the public comments assuming this was another of the usual masseur ends up fucking the wife while husband watches and masturbates. Don't any naormal males write on Literotica. The number of stories that have the wife being fucked by friend, employee or whatever while the husband gets off by watching are amazing. Why did these guys bother getting married? They can get a porno film a lot cheaper than a wife. DISGUSTED
perfection!
I love the process of seduction and this story was absolutely perfect. I couldnt imagine a much better story :)
Another spineless wimp
A male who needs to get off by watching another man fuck his wife is less than a man and doesn't deserve a woman. And a woman who allows this to happen is a whore with no self esteem or personal worth.
The Baron
OMG that was so so good
OMG , That was such a hot story, where do I book my massage ?
I truly thought that was one of the best stories I have read here.
Thankyou.xoxoxoxoxoxoxEmma.
One of the best here
I have bookmarked this story as one of the best ever at this site. Just came back and read it again after a long while. As good as the first time
WOW !!!
WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW !!! - what a great story !!! - It took me a week to read your wonderful story as I kneaded to stop and rest at various times to catch my breath and regain my strength (if you know what I mean !!!)- I am a massage therapist and wish I could go to a school of sensual/erotic massage and learn a few of the techniques described in your story - keep up the good work and let me know if your wife wants to help an amateur turn professional!
There is only one thing better
The only thing better than watching your wife get a THOROUGH massage is masturbating while watching and then sliding your penis into her spermy (and hopefully fertile) cunthole and enjoying her for yourself. IT is truly fantastic!!
More
Still waiting for more from you ....great writing and i have cum many times to this story. I have this same fantasy to do this with my wife
Great Story
This is one of the best massage stories, and you have done an excellent writing job among other things, do write more such stories.
wow... that was awesome! 10 out of 10!
probably the best story i have read here! makes me want to do the same with my wife.
thanks for the story you wrote! it truely is one of the best here.
Age no factor!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Believe it or not, I'm 78 YO and got it off twice. Wow, what a story!!!!!!!
Very Cool
I love massage stories and this is one of the better ones I've read. I can't believe you were able to make it five pages long and still be so good, that's impressive. I'm not big on the husband sharing the wife, but that didn't keep me from enjoying an incredibly well written piece.
A Great Fantasy
I loved this story. It coincides nicely with my own fantasies for my wife. I plan on reading it again, with her, in bed one night soon. I'm sure if she reads it, I'll be in for a great night of hot sex! Thanks Bilbo
wow
Wow...what a page turner! Hot and steamy....I could feel the heat and smell the oil.
Great job!
Jane
YUMMY!!!
I am completely envious of your wife... My husband would undoubtedly never set up anything like that for me. I thoroughly enjoyed the story, thank you so much! I came twice just reading it!!! Thank you!!!
maybe the hottest
Quite possibly the hottest story I've read on Literotica. The way it was told -- and the patience in getting to the heart of it. I felt like I was getting the same teasing!
I also liked all the teasing talk about her ass -- making us think that "one last thing" would be popping her anal cherry with him -- and yet you held that back. Great stuff.
Just Great
Made me wet.
TRUE EROTIC
This is really erotic enough,and also very real to me...
Reread and reread
My favorite, the only literotica story I reread over and over again. I only wish I could do this for my wife -- and watch while she gets done so slowly and so sensually.
Best ever
Best story on this or any other site. Theres a missive reason for that you take time to set the scene and her inhibitions slowly fade away as she is caught in lust! Pure classic!!
hottest yet
I have been secretly reading many stories without my boyfriend's permission. He would die if he knew I was getting off on these stories as I dream of other men and women and we don't even have SEX yet!
This is the hottest story I have read and I have been reading and looking at pictures now for many months.
VERY HOT
WOW - thanks!!!
WOW - very arousing story. Phantastic work! Keep it up! I am dying to read your next story - thanks!!!
Ohhhh Boy!
I think I have orgasmed more more while reading this one story than all the other stories on Lit I have read put together. Thank you , thank you, thank you....cant wait to read more..
very real and very erotic
you write very well. You don'r rush the story. You teased us the way Joel teased Katie. I cant wait to read your next story. I hope it is more about Katie.
It was very erotic Well done
Jim
Loved this story!
Really enjoyed this story! Thanks for writing it!
Sorry, I don't get this one
I don't usually flame stories, but I don't see anything positive about this one. Wimp Hubby pays Super Stud $200 to give his wife more orgasms and better sex than he can... as an anniversary present no less... sounds like a plan to me... NOT. Unless, of course, he really wants out of the relationship because he has somebody else and he's setting slut wife up to ditch. Maybe that's chapter 2 - he pimps her out in a crack house and takes off with somebody else.
Wish my husband would give me this gift!
Even better ... if it "came" from him in person ... so to speak. Very fine writing and sexy as hell. Well done!
Yessss!
one of the signs of a truely gripping erotic story is the author's ability to hold the reader at the edge by slooowwwwly building up to the final countdown. bilbo181 has definitely captured this effect and has written one of the very BEST stories ever, here in Literotica. please try to find the time to write another!
Don't understand gatorhermit's antagonism...
"Sorry, I don't get this one 12/07/06 by gatorhermit in usa
I don't usually flame stories, but I don't see anything positive about this one. Wimp Hubby pays Super Stud $200 to give his wife more orgasms and better sex than he can... as an anniversary present no less... sounds like a plan to me... NOT. Unless, of course, he really wants out of the relationship because he has somebody else and he's setting slut wife up to ditch. Maybe that's chapter 2 - he pimps her out in a crack house and takes off with somebody else." . . . (this was quoted from gatorhermit below)
What would cause gatorhermit to lurk around these cheating wife stories and read them??? Must be coming from a lot of pain to punish himself this way... His comments do pave the way for an interesting turnaround for another story. It would be totally a good plot for the cheating husband to set up his totally proper wife for a big fall with the scenario that gatorhermit sets up. irchristo@yahoo.com
Excellently written story
This was an excellent story, well written and planned. My only disappointment is that I checked to see what other stories you had written and saw that you hadn't submitted since 2004. You have the talent, you should use it! Once again, thank you for the excitement and the buildup to truly sensual pleasure.
Was it really a true story, or was that part of the buildup?
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