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Can We Just Be Friends

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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh908/10/13

would love to be your

Friend : great poem ! thnx for sharin' .....

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by twelveoone08/10/13

now you have to read his (Ash)

hope ur a redhead.
I hate rhymin'coups,
you show real potential.i.e. last three lines really do save this
i 5d this in case you're wondering and I'll probably pay more attention to the next one

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