My Sister's Friends Ch. 05

Wow

Thank you for the story and especially for the last sentence. I am going to carve it into a wooden plaque to hang in my office

Thank YOU!

For sharing this story!

5 *'s

5 *'s is not enough. Thank you for this wrap up chapter.

Beautiful and Touching

Excellent blend of erotic and caring

disabled myself and touched beyond belief, ty

Simple Feedback

Told you I would read some more if you published them, I did - and loved them too.

Good job.
George said so, again.

Well Done. Also last sentence could be used in a interracial story. My gf is Muslim. Me Christia
n. My gf is making stickers of the last line to put on our cars.

Well done

We have talked before, and yep, a very good wrap up. I have CP, and have yet to see these reactions. Pity, as all I have met, are the ones that can't see past the limp. Whether, physical, mental, economic, or religion these pre conceived limits, will forever harm us. Truly, the holder more so than the victim.

Thank you again

Bloody awesome

A great way of looking at it. As someone who has a long term disability I saw exactly where you were coming from. Please continue your writing

A life story...

This entire series should be given a permanent place on the top ten list.

thank you

Thank you for this story. I have a great friend who has cp and he struggles to walk. He has he braces on his legs with the crutches. And care more about everyone around him. He was over looked for a long time. Then one day he fell at the grocery store and the lady that helped him up became his .gf. she asked him to lunch for a" knocking him over" and while he tried to explain. She didn't knock him over, she wouldn't listen to him and while now he is in a wheel chair due to other health issues they have 3 kids and have twins on the way due in November 29th.

thank you

Thank you for this story. I have a great friend who has cp and he struggles to walk. He has he braces on his legs with the crutches. And care more about everyone around him. He was over looked for a long time. Then one day he fell at the grocery store and the lady that helped him up became his .gf. she asked him to lunch for a" knocking him over" and while he tried to explain. She didn't knock him over, she wouldn't listen to him and while now he is in a wheel chair due to other health issues they have 3 kids and have twins on the way due in November 29th.

Totally Special

Thank-you for this story. So special on so many levels. I do hope many non-handicapped people read and learn from this as I have done and will continue to promote.

Well Done

I just found the last part of your series and then went back and read the whole lot.
Very well written about an issue that is too often hidden and ignored about how society ignores and ostracizes people with disabilities, focusing on what they can't do rather than what they can do.
Erotic and moving story, well done and keep it up.

This has to be the best story I have ever read. Lots of people could learn from it. But they won't. Most people are only out for themselves.

Thank you so much...

I do have cp but not as severe as your characters. The Gift of my disability is that I have always looked beyond the outer appearances to what is Within. Your characters learned this also. Blessings and thanks again. Joe.

Best of the BEST

Best story I have ever read....has it all!!!!

Aretha said it best, Respect, and may I add Love.

Outstanding! What a wonderful story.

Bravo!

This was an amazing story and you are to be commended for bringing to light people who are facing permanent health issues ... they are just like the rest of us in that they can be caring, loving individuals.

Thanks for a great series! KM

Thank You

This is hands down the best story I have read on the site.

Wonderful

This is inspiring. Your writing is vivid and overflows with loving energy. Thank you for doing what great artists do - illuminating the human condition!

pure love

This story is about love and acceptance. It taught me that soft and gentle is the best way always.

Marvelous

A marvelous and sensitive story. Thank you so much.

Lovely story

with a poignant message

Thanks

This story was really touching, some of use don't show how badly we are disabled to brighten others around us. And some hide it so much they lead to the doubt that the character had at the start, this is quote refreshing thanks alot for the good read!

beautiful

I have read many stories on this website.but none as beautiful or heart wrenchingly sweet as this one. Even though this has sex in it, it wasn't just sex, it was love. I have a baby brother with CP, so that makes it very near and dear to my heart thank you for writing this.

Very very very well written. One of the best stories I've read. Great job.

Very very well written. Enjoyable reading. Great job.

Sweet sentiment

I appreciate that people should be able to see past a persons handicap to who they really are. However, just because a person is dealing with a condition doesn't automatically confer sainthood on them. Handicapped people are just like everyone else. Some are good, lots are regular people, and a few are real jerks. I think you laid it on a little thick with the adoration for this guy and converting a bunch of teen hotties into adoring subjects of the cp demigod.

A beautiful story

Thank you for publishing it. I can't add anything to most of the above comments, but an awesome story.

Beautiful Series

I've known only a few handicapped people, and I'm afraid I could never get past the outward image to really know them as humans, even though I was perfectly aware that I could easily have been them, or could still become as they. It's a large fault in me in this life, and if there is anything to soul return, I will doubtless have some future life of disability. I hope I can live it as gracefully as Jared. And as luckily.

excellent

...and i am not talking about the sex.... Great story and fabulous epilogue. Read all your stories and voted 5 for all of them.

again perfection

Hi , if the whole human race could think along these lines what a wonderful world it would be , its a shame there are so few of us that do think like this - cheers

How dare you

How dare you make such a wonderful story that is not only a great read but also makes a great point about those disabilities and how they are perceived Another wonderfully written story that helps affirm your place as one of my favorite authors

fantastic

Iv read all your storys and i cant stop reading ill re read them over again many times. If you ever put these storys into a book ill buy it as fast. there are many storys on here but none as well writen as your .

Thanks

Thank you for writing possibly the best story in Literotica. It is surely not very erotic. It is not really sexy at all. It is a story that should be a novel, a movie, a lesson in every youth church group's lesson plans.

I'm an old man, but not too old to truly wish I knew some way to convince you to expand the horizon and do more with your skills.

Bill Wimpenney
wkwimp@gmx.com

Awesome

I've read all of your stories and i just love them!
I hope you write some more soon :)

Love it

I love your stories some more than others and this one is truly special.... thanks

Fantastic story!

Loved the story, and Wkwimp must really be an old man if he thinks it wasn't erotic!

Sadly, disabled people don't just get ignored socially, they're also often not treated as people by carers who should know better. When I was in hospital for an operation for tachycardia I met a woman with CP who told me how a nurse had asked her husband, in her presence, a medical question she should have asked her directly, as though this quite intelligent woman was too dimwitted to answer for herself. The husband quite rightly said "Why don't you ask her yourself?". The really stupid thing is that the question was one the husband could only have answered if his wife had told him the answer. Another lovely wheelchair-bound woman I got to know told me how she was forced onto a virtual starvation diet to control her weight (it's a lot harder to burn off calories in a wheelchair!).

I've also met one disabled person with an ugly selfish personality, although I think he probably had the personality before he got the disability by falling out of a building whilst rotten drunk.

Slightly off topic: I think they should not have changed terms from "handicapped" to "disabled". After all, a horse with a handicap can still win a race, and a golfer with a handicap can still win the game, but "disabled" seems just too absolute.

We morn

Callicious's passing he was a true Human with a heart as big as all outdoors to be able to write stories like these.

Thank You for This!

As an man with CP I've known disdain and outright ridicule. Even though I'm very high functioning ( to the point a doctor refused to believe I had CP, in spite of piles of medical paperwork that said otherwise.) I still find many things difficult to accomplish. And to top it off I'm a twenty five year old virgin. This story brought tears to my eyes, because this could have been about me.

Thank you...so much. I only hope the girl I've begun a tentative long distance relationship with can be as understanding as the lovely ladies in your story.

Please add more to your library.

Callicious:
I've just finished everything in your library list, and I must admit that I find your style liberating and insightful. As I've said, some of your threads could actually be fleshed out and published.
I am, and yes, I know that one shouldn't begin a paragraph with I; fascinated with your descriptive ability when you detail a protagonist's emotional responses to all forms of stimuli.
Thank you for your submissions, and please consider additional offerings.

A lot of us miss him.

Sadly, no more tales from him.

Awesome!!

I had tears in my eyes reading parts of this whole story. I have had friends who are handicapped, as I now am. I also have two illnesses that cause me severe looks because it doesn't look like I have a disease/illness. Thank you. Please keep writing!!

Almost a mirror

I kow how you feel, I myself have 2 chornic conditions that are hereditary and so far, incurable. The first one made itself known in school, although it wasn't too severe. The second one showed yp after I turned 20, when it was found in my cousin. Then I ended up having it, and now I routinely have check-ups to make sure the second one doen;t become life-threatening.