You have set up a great scene here - I hope you will continue with it and tell us much more about this fascinating woman and the things she faces. Five stars - thank you.
I see you hadnt planned to do more! That would be a shame...may I suggest 29 chapters..one for each day, detailing what happens for us to enjoy....?!
Great writing...right up my street.
English
Love it
Totaly relate to this.
I hope we some scenes of 'married life'
Good set up.
A bit rushed, would like to see this community explore more...
Nicely done
You have set up a great scene here - I hope you will continue with it and tell us much more about this fascinating woman and the things she faces. Five stars - thank you.
Nice, I rather liked this story, will there be more?
Nice story, hope you continue it.
my dream . . .
One day i hope please Sir . . .
Really nice start
Hope you continue. Good work thus far.
do another chapter
This is amazing!! I hope u do another chapter for this story I would love that
Thank you
Thank you for the comments. I had no plans to continue, but now, I believe I will try.
You Must!
I see you hadnt planned to do more! That would be a shame...may I suggest 29 chapters..one for each day, detailing what happens for us to enjoy....?!
Great writing...right up my street.
AMAAAZIINGG!!!!!!!!
I literally can't wait for any more, will be checking daily!!!
So a woman deserves to be treated worse than an animal?
Even for fiction this was disgusting.
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