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by mBrow08/17/13

Revision of earlier story

This story was oddly similar to the author’s other Lit offering. Unquenchable Thirst, of 10/17/11. Much of the plot and text were the same. I suspect that readers would be more accepting if Appetitefordesire would simply state, in a foreword or in comments, that she is simply offering a new version of the story.
I usually don’t like futa stories, but this tale is better than many.

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