A Helping Hand

A bit disappointing. I was waiting for the expected surprise ending, but it didn't come. Maybe we've been spoilt!

Too short

The premise and plot are good. I think you should re-write this, develop the story and characters more.

To be honest . . . it was over in a flash and therefore not very erotic and very anti-climatic.

:-)

Well I liked it.
Rachel

You are one of my favorite erotica writers.

I wish you would expand on your stories a little. Seems like they all end just as it was getting good.

Some might say it is rape but rapists don't usually see to it that their victim has a climax, nor do they tell her they are going tomzke love to her. There should be a other chapter.

Something missing

You have great premise for all of your stories which are very inviting. But all of the ones I have read lack one vital ingredient: passion! I get the feeling that you are so proud of your matter-of-fact approach. For this reason I stay away from your stories.

Possible humor?

The personality of the "helping hand" was so full of himself, but yet inviting. The story made me smile actually. I found humor in it. I would love to read more about these guys.

Intriguing

Nothing more irresistible than temptation.