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Indisciplined Genius out of which is born
World-shakin' Epics : is it still possible , Tess in the e-world of Amazon & kindle today ?? or is this the hoary past retro world ? either way a very evocative piece one can just see the restlessly brilliant poet smokin' n ruminatin' n his den !!
witchery
love this line...an uncertain future
in a perpetual past.
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I for one haven't forsaken the world of real books for the e variety and in my house they tumble everywhere. The bottles are there too, so I wonder if you've been peering into my windows!
Zygotes in my coffee anthem
Tess, that last line like Harry says is the clench.
I don't think you quite get
how good you are. This poem should be submitted to a journal (I betcha Zygote would grab it), not left to languish anywhere. I could go on for paragraphs about why this works, but I won't bore you lol. My only quibble is with "His" because it introduces a man into what otherwise is whoever the reader imagines, but maybe you are writing about someone specific. :)
Hey this is the first poem I've favorited in years!
POETS AND WARRIORS HAVE NO PLACE
but thrive in every place. TK U MLJ LV NV
5ed
no question ob that, re re reconsider
a twinkle in the poet's eye,
(unless it is the sunlight through the empty bottles)
Some merely zygotes, an uncertain future
in a perpetual past.
has more impact?no?
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