I Never Meant To Fall In Love Ch. 04

I really hope he doesn't forget Lauren

I like Lauren

I certainly wouldn't pay for your boring work! and the email within the story? 50 Shades much?

not that other anon

Just wanted to say contrary to my other anon peer I love this story the sex was one of the hottest scenes I've read on hear and I look forward to eusas dirty talk and possessive nature

love your story but i think..

Lauren is the one. I like her with him. I hope he doesnt fall in love with eliza
Great story so far.
So maybe he's going sleep with eliza..right at some point? I really like lauren , if not maybe she deserves someone better

I am not sure I like the twist to the plot...

I hope he does not fall for Eliza. I would have loved to see where his and Lauren's story goes. I hope you add some more to this story.

I don't like where this story is going, im for lauren and esau.

-.- lord or lord

why oh why is this happening... i believe he should jump on the plane and go back home immediately in the next chapter ;l i dont like where this is going

A VERY Interesting story,

Why did you stop?

I do feel like most of the others and would like to see Lauren end up with Esau! However that is only because that is what you wanted us to look forward to. Don't let our opinions take you away from your vision of these characters!

But please do continue the series. :-)

more please ;

Please continue, i am hoping for lauren and essau together. Essau and eliza can be platonic with her being the foil that gets lauren to show her feelings towards essau withiu meaning too. And maybe eliza can hire lauren so essau wont feel office inappropriate. Or something else fo lauren wile esau is gone. Just please continue, this is the first time i have commented on a story..