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Three Little Poems About Love

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by GuiltyPleasure08/14/13

Five....

....for three. Simple yet spot on! The final line in the first poem could go, in fact just the first verse alone would suffice,

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by Angeline08/15/13

What Tristesse said

A wonderful little trio that is spare but rich with sensuality. I'd end the first one at "flame" as I think it would balance the poem better, but I'm quibbling because it's all really good. Thanks for sharing it. :-)

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