All Comments on 'The Organist Entertains Ch. 01'

You captured that bit of erotica nicely. I loved the innocent sharing and the concern they showed for each other. I enjoyed the fact that she was able to be sensual in her sexuality and that he responded to her advances.

Loved the twist at the front door .

I think the widower is going to get lucky with Abigale's divorced Mom.

Trish looks like she'd like some of Peter's hardon.

Looking forward.

Thanks

Thoroughly enjoyed this hopefully chapter 1 of many. The missing mobile may have put the cat among the pigeons, but may also have produced a follow up with Abigail's mom. Please write more chapters on this theme.

I want to add what Paxo1944 said, that there needs to be a sequel with Trish, Abigal's mom, in it. You did an good job with mixing humor, sex and normal routine into the story. Leave out lesbian and a lot of anal screwing, maybe a little, but some stories have too much, and I am not a fan of numerous activities like this. This story had none, and I liked it. My opinion

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I'm in love with Peter! You write him so well, and it's an added bonus that he's an organist. I'd love to play his organ!