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Parfum Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by wdelander08/19/13

Wow - very unexpected!

But carried a lot of realism. Well done!

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by Anonymous08/19/13

Please continue!!

I can't wait for more.

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by Littleprick08/20/13

Still great

I loved it. Too bad it was just one page. I look forward to the next chapter.

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by Anonymous08/20/13

This is great so far. The sexual tension scene was done so well, James was written really well as this horny teen put in this unbelievable situation. Excellent job, looking forward to his upcoming dates!

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by Josephep200308/20/13

I like it.....

Hope you write chapter 3 soon!!!! Great premise and very enjoyable reading.

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