If you want to be credibly critical grow a pair and use a listed account put your money where you mouth is. Some of us are not gifted in grammar and spelling but can tell a story. Can you? Publish or shut up. An anon complaint should carry all of the weight of the paper it is printed on!
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Mispelled title???????
'A Erotic Dream...- I woke up form an erotic dream and had to share. '
Make up your mind.
Does "a" come before a vowel or does "an"?
Wow!!!!!!!!
Do you ever like exclamation marks!?!?
Especially when you run your moth over the material!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I'm sure that helps you choose a tense and stay with it!!!!!! Not to mention other shitty spellings!!
Please!!! Do us all a favor and flush any other stories you've written!!! And don't write anything else!!!!! You suck!!!!!
For the grammar and style police....
If you want to be credibly critical grow a pair and use a listed account put your money where you mouth is. Some of us are not gifted in grammar and spelling but can tell a story. Can you? Publish or shut up. An anon complaint should carry all of the weight of the paper it is printed on!
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