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A Nice Sister's Gift Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/30/08

learn

learn to write in english or just submit your stories in your own language and stop giving us headaches trying to figure out what you are saying

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by _vernon01/24/09

Wasn't going to comment

but wanted to give you a different idea than "learn": maybe you don't write in perfect English, but your writing is FAR better than many other writers use, even though English is their FIRST language. So keep submitting your stories; improve your skills as you can, but don't stop writing just because you don't do it perfectly, because you're better than many other writers.

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by Whitedeathknight12/11/10

aaww

What I nice sister lucky ass

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by Anonymous03/06/12

???

Whats the point of a story if I can't understand what you're saying? Have a proofreader if English isn't your first language PLEASE!!!!!!

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by Anonymous06/16/13

Sweet! Liked the ending. ;)

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by Anonymous12/10/13

Fucking load of rubbish By a wanker

Fucking load of rubbish By a wanker

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