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Then and Now!
When I was a kid, if some guy was caught screwing someones wife, an asskicking took place. Now not only can you not kick their ass, they end up with your house, wife and money, even if you don't kick their ass. And if you do you end up in jail getting your ass fucked. So if someone can get awayt with getting their pound of flesh from some dude screwing their wife and not go to jail, sounds good to me! So this dude fucks someones wife and ends up hurt! Big deal! Maybe if he had left her alone, nothing would have happen! I know that if I caught someone in my bed with my wife, it would be all I could do not to kick their ass! But, since our kindler, gentler world along with laws and jails take that out of the choices, I guess I would end up getting rid of her and then one night taking them out of this life.
Then and now, eh?
See, this may be the problem that some deeply offended people have. You know, the ones who are offended when someone gets beaten to hell or killed in one of these stories. It's ok for them if the wife cheats, if she manipulates and abuses the hubby, even if she turns him into a plaything for her lovers. In their warped little minds, all the abuse is supposed to be one sided, and the offended party is supposed to play by the rules, which of course, only encourages the second and more forceful fucking at the hands of the law. A wise man, understanding that the wife has changed the rules by which they live, plays by his own set of rules. It's a little like our country now...someone does something bad to us or our friends, and we send notes of protest, feeble little actions that only humiliate us and encourage our enemies to do far worse. Meh. I say, once war is declared, all bets are off and all's fair in love and war.
Feh
Anon, you don't get it.
It isn't that the story has violence which is offensive. It is that knuckleheads like you try to paint it as 'justice'. Even JPB frankly says in some of his BTB stories that the protagonist went crazy and acted immorally. Morality doesn't change just because you don't like the victim.
No, this isn't justice. It is Vengence. I understand if a husband such as this does horrible acts. But they are STILL horrible acts.
Damn
I'm sorry FD45, but I believe you are the knucklehead here. Remember, this is fiction. Anything can happen in fiction. Some of us who have been deceived and betrayed by our spouse sometimes need to read about extreme justice. In my case it made no sense to go after the assholes who were with my skank (wife). She was already dead and decomposing when I discovered her bullshit. So don't be so high and mighty in your comments about us who like justice you sanctimonious piece of crap. By the way I respect your writing but before you knock someone else take a look at yourself. Yeah I know I haven't written anything yet so there goes that argument against me.
Fuck
Welcome to daylight saving time.
HE WAS PRETTY NICE
considering the circumstances. TK U MLJ LV NV
To the naysayers
Ask yourselves how she thought of her actions. Ask further what her future plans were (every man at work?). Ask yourselves how you would feel if you knew what your wife had done. Ask yourselves how you would feel coming home to sloppy seconds knowing she planned to do it again, and a gain, and again, and . . . .
Too Much? Too hard on her?
Loved it!
Boy you sure can get the heckles up & the reactions flowing.
Somehow those who detract seem to miss the point - 'It's only a story!'
However... not to worry - keep up the good work.
Paul C
Justice? Vengence?
Doesn't matter what you call it, it is what it is. Closure, payback, pathos? The wife in the original story had absolutely no redeeming characteristics, as written. She was absolutely enthralled and enraptured by the thought of making her husband, because of real or imagined slights to her, her cuckold and the object of her scorn and derision. Now, enough big words. She was a cunt, plain and simple. Her thinking had gotten really fuzzy for some reason. The things that she had planned for her life and for her husband to endure would have probably driven him insane, kind of like she obviously was. I applaud the writer of this little snippet. He found a way for the husband to distract the wife and get her mind centered again. Really kind of a humanitarian if you ask me. As for the boys that tried to help her with her new life, well, there are consequences for our every action. The more heinous the actions, etc. Remember, all you little cuck girls and cuck writers (FD45) this wasn't your story to write, it wasn't your story to fuck up so just read it and thank your lucky stars that you can be immune to this influence and still worship cheating women and cream pies. Just so you know, not everyone has a butt-fucking (receiving) fantasy so there you go.
@FD45
Interesting that you brought up morality. You see, morality is the law between God and man. It is not ethics, actions between people. It is not civil or criminal law actions between man and society. When you invoke morality you must be prepared to explain which faith's morality you wan to claim. The three major religions that the world draws it sense of morality from are Judaism, Christianity, and Islam. If you read the texts from these faiths and you study their view points on adultery you may now have an understanding on what is "justice" as opposed to vengeance. Both Judaism and Islam call for the deaths of adulterers. Christianity has the famous passage where Jesus forgive the adulterous woman. Of course he was the son of God, so perhaps it is his to forgive. On the other hand he also said that not one word of the law would pass away until the end of the world. Jewish law. So in word if not always in practice the three major religions all call for the execution of adulterers. This fact, is moral justice and it echos in the hearts of those injured by acts of adultery.
Even if you have not been a victim of infidelity it is not hard for a reasonable person to understand why it causes so much harm. To start with, marriage is much more than a romantic relationship. It is the most basic strategy to human survival. Many in the western world have lost this understanding as women have become more economically independent. Unfortunately, survival is more than money. It is love, friendship, children, family, emotional support and stability. Rip that away from a person and expect them to feel threatened, hurt, angry, damaged - because they have been! To expect them to suck it up, accept the losses and move on is stupid. A price must be paid for what has been stolen. In this case, over tens of thousands of years the price that has been determined to be fair (by many cultures) is the death of the adulterers. So, to all the cuckolds, liberals, and assorted "enlightened" shitheads out there - get your heads out of your asses. (you are probably just trying to justify your own adulterous behavior!)
She and all the people at her work knew...
She and all the people at her work knew from that day on that she was off limits and who tried to get her would finish almost dead, or worst than dead...
I TRULY BELIEVE
she got the point. TK U MLJ LV NV
Excellent!
Thanks for sharing.
the "Tims" of the world
don't get it
Should change genre
This author should switch genre and begin writing "slasher" or even horror stories.
@mcbs
I think you should re-read this tale again. Then picture yourself as the faithful husband watching his wife cheat. Now comment again.
Shit
It was life changing
After he went to sleep, she got dressed and went to the Police station. She gave the Police a full explanation of her cheating and then swore out a complaint against her husband for spousal abuse and spousal rape. After the hospital stitched up her ripped ass she was put into protective custody. He was arrested. She got a divorce and moved across the country and changed her name. She never cheated again.
Yes, Life Changing and Sometimes Ending
Anonymous 02/26/15... Yup, she filed a complaint. There were no prior complaints, no history of spousal abuse or violence, no witnesses to any prior abuse at all, just nothing. Brad swore their sex was consensual and must have gotten a little too vigorous, he was crushed by her not simply telling him when it got uncomfortable for her. The hospital found evidence of sexual activity both vaginally and anally but could not testify that it was non consensual since there was no aggressive bruising anywhere else on her body from a attack of that nature. What was known was there are many instances of such extreme sexual activities between consenting adults.The DA just couldn't find the evidence necessary for a trial and conviction, so the complaint died quietly, perhaps even with a small whimper. Her protective custody was only good while the complaint was active so she moved far away. She thought changing her name was a smart thing to do. Unfortunately, it was ineffective in hiding her location since the SSA did not find sufficient grounds for changing her SSAN . :( Many months later, after sleep finally comes, a cheating sluts apartment door quietly opens in the dead of the night and....well, it was the DEAD of the night after all. ;)
I approached infidelity differently
I don't mind our protagonist reacted this way and in fact, encourage it.
But I reacted differently. The old cliché of coming home from work early, actually, only an hour after I left because we broke down. The crew was sent home until the log loader could be repaired. It was odd that my best friends 1973 Chevy 1/2 ton was sitting in the driveway, but he often stopped by and got a tool from my garage when he needed it. I never thought twice about it when I was dropped off and walked in the door. The sounds were unmistakable and I was crushed, heartbroken. We were just beginning to prepare for trying to get her pregnant.
I walked down the short hall and pushed the partly opened door and sure enough, there was Tom on top of my wife, Jodi and he was pounding hard. He was grunting and panting, she was moaning and encouraging him to "fuck my cunt harder, lover." I just stood there and looked for a moment before Tom happened to look over and stopped just as he started to cum and my wife's reaction was to tell him to fill her up with a baby. When I started to throw up in the doorway, it snapped her out of the lust filled fog she was in. I turned and walked back to the living room and waited by the front door.
It wasn't more than a couple minutes and my former best friend was completely dressed and head out the door past me and my wife was behind him, and stopped to stand in the living room. I was ready and when he went out the doorway, I hit him in the stomach as hard as I could. At 6' tall and 240lbs of hard muscled logger, it literally knocked him out. Every bit of rage I was filled with is what hit him. He lay still and when he started coming around, began to vomit. He lay there in pain half in and half out of the door. I kicked him in the ass four times hard enough to push him across the threshold so I could close the door.
My reaction to my wife? I ignored her. I turned my back on her and refused to interact. She tried all day to get me to talk, crying and apologizing, but I refused to respond, even look at her. To me, she didn't exist any longer. When she fixed lunch, I ignored her and the food she fixed, instead, I made a sandwich and went out to the garage. When later she called me to say dinner was ready, I went in, washed up and went out to dinner, alone. Later when I came home, I went into the study and watched a basketball game and ignored when she came in and tried to talk, I turned up the tv to ear splitting decibels.
Tom's wife called to tell me he had been admitted to the hospital with severe stomach pain, letting us know so that we could visit him if we wanted. That's when I explained to her, it was probably from when I punched him in the stomach earlier that day after I caught him fucking my ex wife. My wife heard what I said and burst into tears and continued crying while I talked. I let her know they had been doing it for a while, judging by how comfortable they were and they were trying to have a baby together. That made Jodi begin to nearly howl. I let Tom's wife she'd better let him know I planned to do the same thing every single time I laid eyes on him, whether I had to chase him down the street to do it. She was crying as hard as Jodi when we finally hung. up. By then, my wife had went to bed. I went to the guest room and setting my alarm, I went to bed.
The next morning after I was showered and dressed for the day, I passed through the kitchen to start my day. My wife was already there, she'd cooked a really nice looking breakfast and had both places set for us. I ignored her and walked out and headed uptown for breakfast and the bank. By the time I went home in the early afternoon, I'd opened new accounts and took my name off our old joint account. Also, she was no longer a beneficiary nor was she covered by my insurance. I also had my lawyer contact the local papers to say I was no longer responsible for any debts she incurred.
The house was quiet that night and I had brought home take out Chinese for one. She had cooked again and two places were laid out. I ate my dinner in the study where I could watch another game. The house was quiet when I went to bed, so I assumed Jodi had already retired.
She got the idea when she went to get gas and groceries and found her debit card no longer functioned. She tearfully told me she had to leave the groceries at the supermarket and almost ran out of gas on the way home. Of course, I had little to say, nothing in fact. I fixed a big sandwich and then went to bed. She was tearful the next day when she told me she'd called the bank only to find our bank account empty. She didn't work so I hoped she realized at some point she'd need to find a job so she could move out.
Not long after I got home, Tom's wife stopped by. When Jodi saw who it was, she ran and hid in our bedroom. What a fucking cunt loser. Lisa let me know she was going to wait until Tom was out of the hospital before she had divorce papers served, because they had to operate, finding a lacerated liver and removed his spleen. He never reported me as an attacker, instead made the excuse he'd had an accident at home. He was going to have a lengthy hospital stay and he was going to go home to find it empty. I told her I assumed Jodi would move in with him since they were trying to have a baby. It turned out she was listening because we heard her wail and the bedroom door closed again.
That's it. Its been 6 years since that day. Lisa divorced Tom and moved on. She moved away with their 3 kids and has remarried. Tom was released from the hospital and went home to an empty home. As soon as he was well enough, he moved away too. Did he contact Jodi? I don't know and don't care.
And Jodi? Well, one day her folks came over and picked her and her stuff up. She left a note saying she was going to spend a week or two with her folks and she'd be back. Then, with the help of her folks, we'd sit down and work on our marriage. Me? Within 48 hours of her going to her folks, I was beginning to move all the stuff I wanted into a large Uhaul van. It didn't take more than 2 days to get everything I wanted. I had a job to move to, my company had a place for me about 800 miles away and I changed my phone number.
I haven't seen Jodi since that day when they moved her out. Friends told me lives at home to this day and rarely leaves her folks house. She doesn't work nor date, as far as they know. She tried to contact me but I didn't respond to messages she left me at my workplace. We're still married but I am living with a woman and both of us have agreed to not marry, whether or not whether we have children but plan to never split up. I don't care what happens to Jodi.
God, fear's wornderful
Ain't it? 5 stars.
If they don't love you, then better to fear you.
You nailed this one
What? Was this guy in witness protection or something? LOL
To Anonymous "Love Your Writing"
"Try your hand at finishing story found on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com"
That is an email address NOT a Facebook profile. I suppose that could be your email address, and you want people to contact you. If so, then say so.You spam every story with this. What I suggest is you write a story about this event, changing the names, just enough to avoid a libel suit You can even change the location. You can even take some "artistic license" and "enhance" the story.
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