"Just as they were greeting really frenzied" Do you even proof read your own work?
For fucks sake! This is the first time I have ever read anything of yours and I won't be reading anything else! My god get an editor!
...it ended before it began.
Lame plot, awful dialogue and simply very poorly written,
you cannie be bothered to separate the words in your tagline... I cannie be bothered to read your story. One star for stupid carelessness.
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"Just as they were greeting really frenzied"
Do you even proof read your own work?
For fucks sake! This is the first time I have ever read anything of yours and I won't be reading anything else! My god get an editor!
What an odd story....
...it ended before it began.
Lame
Lame plot, awful dialogue and simply very poorly written,
Since
you cannie be bothered to separate the words in your tagline...
I cannie be bothered to read your story.
One star for stupid carelessness.
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Back to History Rules, End of Story or
More submissions by alexcarr.