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So hot!!
I'm not normally into incest stories, but the nonconsent aspect is brilliantly written and makes a really hot scene.
Loved the story
It was a very unique, and interesting premise not one I normally would have enjoyed, but you know what I didn't look to hard into it, enjoyed it as a story. Keep up the great work and I'd really enjoy this story to continue. I hope you do continue it as I really enjoyed the creativity and uniqueness that you supplied. Thank you very much
Please continue
Normally I wouldn't find this sort of thing hot, but actually it kinda was. I think you might hit 50/50 with your readers on whether or not they like it, but I personally am in the positive. Continue on with it. :) Wouldn't mind see all holes filled up either *hint hint*
My Cock-Sleeve Sister (full length) is in the making, folks.
You probably thought I'd forgotten about you, or would never answer your prayers.
Well, a full length story, My Cock-Sleeve Sister is in the making, folks, and if you liked this, it will blow your mind - and maybe a few other things ... That's all. Keep a look out on Smashwords & Amazon under Jason Honz. Feel free to email me suggestions of what you'd like to see the siblings doing. It might just make it in (or maybe into a shorter piece).
One of the greatest TS stories on Literotica
This one is fantastic, with the only flaw being that it's too short. I'd place this story in the same league as as the absolute best from greats like SugarandSalt, vicjohnson, DaBlackMamba, ruwild, YANKEE DAN, conroy39, irradiatedd and Laz110.
So damn hot, and I love how you never have the sub start to love it near the end or retake control, which are cop-outs that way too many non-con/reluctance authors tend to use.
'Revenge on My Little Sister' is easily in my top 10 of stories that I read when I want to cum in 5 minutes or less. When are you going to post 'My Cock-Sleeve Sister'? I want it now dammit. Also you need to write more stories in general, talent like yours should not be wasted.
Simple, Brilliant and charmingly naughty.
Best story ever as a fellow sex writer I need more,to study your ways, keep wrting RavishedDoe. Just do it!
I hate you
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YAAAAAAS
YAS BITCH YAS
Double YAAAAAAAS
YAAAAAAAAASSSSSS,bitch
YAAAASS,bitch
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This is stolen
http://short-fiction-ebooks.com/_/_/515784/my-cock-s leeve-sister-novella
Take a look at this. This guy stole the first 'chapter' of this novella, removed the names, made it first person, and claimed it as his own. This guy is no writer, he's a thief.
OH MY GOD!!!!!
This is the BEST story I have read in a long time. PLEASE DON'T stop writing!!!!! And you are now OBLIGATED to write a part 2 because this story was sooooo fuckin HOT!!!!!! and was absolutely amazing!!
Not Stolen
To Anonymous, This story is not stolen. The person who wrote this story is the same person who published this story. Alexis Foyer and Jason J. Hontz are the same person. "Alexa" wrote it in first person and "Jason" did not. Please get your facts straight before you blame people for shit they didn't do. If you don't believe me you can go here to see for yourself https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/515784
Thank You,
Rose
Wow........this needs a sequel!!!
This was great! If it could get a sequel......that'd be great!
problom with muscle mechanics here
I refuse to believe that she would be able to push her sister and herself backward enough to get her sister under a bed using just her arms especially with the resistance friction of carpet, plus her sister struggling the whole time.
Why are these not realistic?
If Tasha spoke up her life would not be over... the rapist life will be over.
JS... no hate.
pfff.
this story is such bullshit.... not even believable fiction.
I enjoyed but have a questiom
I enjoyed this very much but find it odd because if a girl was really in that situation she would have bit down on her brothers dick while the mom was there causing pain and revealing what was going on or she would have bit it long before than even lol but again nice story I enjoyed and made me cum 2 times as read half chummed then read the other half cumming again
Duyam but to those who dont know
to those who dont know, these are two girls, one normal, the other a shemale, a girl with a dick and pussy
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