All Comments on 'Something Missing'

I hope there is more to come.

More, please - five stars and thank you for this amazing story.

Thank you everyone for all the positive feedback! I'm working on the next one, which will continue the narrative where it stopped here.

I'm glad all of you liked it! :)

What a first offering....That's how you say...Hello, I'm here and I'm going to write for you! So easy to connect to the emotions of the female character, starting her off w/a bang.

Can't wait for more.....WELCOME TO LIT!!!!!

Lovely!! Just amazing.

Thank you! :)

Author read about 'face slapping' on any BDSM site and find out. "Face slapping cannot be done Safely", the "face is not designed to withstand trauma" One misplaced slap can result in detached retina to fractures of delicate facial bones. Gave it a 1* based on this. Leave face slapping out and I would have given a 5*

Sexy! Waiting for the next part of the story!

True, it can cause a lot of major problems. Quoting from the article you cited, it can be "safER".

There is no non-consensual abuse going on here. Nor is he hitting her out of anger. He isn't doing it to hurt her, only to intensify the experience and her position as a bottom. :)

There is an enlightening article on idahoBDSM on the subject if you want to read further on precautions to be taken, and factors to consider while indulging in the activity. Always adhere to RACK (Risk Aware Consensual Kink) !