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An Orgasm Sonnet

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by Angeline08/17/13

This is really good

you used the frame of the form to create something very modern. Not sure I love the caps, but I understand the need to get those words across like a scream. Easy five. :-)

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by Ashesh908/17/13

Orgasmic pleasure peakin' @ Himalayan Heights ?!!

5-ed from the Land of tge Himalayas !

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by twelveoone08/18/13

5ed

nice..................

like the skewer of the rhyme, 'cept the HI-HI-HI-HI-
HI
sounds like the sound of ashes

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