All Comments on 'An Orgasm Sonnet'

by WillOtheWisp

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AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
This is really good

you used the frame of the form to create something very modern. Not sure I love the caps, but I understand the need to get those words across like a scream. Easy five. :-)

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Orgasmic pleasure peakin' @ Himalayan Heights ?!!

5-ed from the Land of tge Himalayas !

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
5ed

nice..................

like the skewer of the rhyme, 'cept the HI-HI-HI-HI-

HI

sounds like the sound of ashes

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