You Can Have Me If You Want Me

punchline

instead of a rushed ending after all the buildup, she should have repeated the punchline "you can have me if you want me" while completely naked with plenty of time available. then, repeat the punchline as he enters her, but hesitates. he, of course, surrenders and slams her cunt hard.
by the way, i've been a huge fan of heinlein for about forty years. i don't recall the punchline in any of his stories. which one is it from?

BRILLIANT

THE TITLE SAYS IT ALL, MORE MORE

WOLF

you can have me if your want

well done thanks will watch for more

5 star~ HOT

I think that if a story can make you cum, it's a damn good story! Loved all of the ones I've read by you so far! You're Hot !!

Great Story

The story developed well. The suspence and chance of getting caught were well done. He was worried about his son walking in, but once he started he needed to cum. Keep writing.

F-I-L sex

Loved your story, kind of hit home. I've been doing my father-in-law for quite some time and hubby is
aware. We even do an occasional 3-some. Guess I should write about some of the things they
have made their little slut do to amuse them.

my thighs are shaking

I came in record time...my heart pounding at the excitement of my husband catching me reading this story. =)

really hot!

this story was great, especially the "hurrying" and "danger" aspects! I enjoyed imagining her bending over in a daze...truly one of the hottest and naughtiest stories I've read!
thank you.

gave U a 5, dude

loved the cadence of "you can have me" that kept beating like a sexual metronome throughout the story. Great tension and anticipation in a well-written story. Thanks for the good work.

Feel good story

This was one of the best stories I've read. It was truly exciting. I was very turned on after reading it.

my son's best

each time my son gets a new girlfriend she is better than the last. this could be the one i meet next!!

Hot!

So did you knock her up?

Hot,

and so juicy. Tempting fate and winning by a whisker. Well done.

Congratulations!

And i'm not just saying that because of all the correct punctuation marks! (Although man... a way to this girls heart let me tell you... ).

Five-stars!

Yummmmyyyyyyyy!

Great

Fantastic... my panties are soaked from just reading it... but I want MORE

Yummy

I squirted sooooo much thank you ;)

ALMOST FOUND OUT

NICE WELL PUT TOGETHER 4 STARS.............................R............... ................

been fucking my one daughter -in-law for 15 yrs.