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Very good
I hear you on the weeds, been doing the same and having the same result. I like the flow of this poem, especially the second stanza.
njoy, good to see you
pull 'em don't spray 'em ....enough poison in the world . 5 smiles.
Seriously
I usually object to words like
"Kaleidoscope"
Here it kind of makes the poem, hmmm what does she mean by....
5ed
Short and to the point
and that second quatrain is wonderful because a kaleidoscope does break an image into bits of image. I saw exactly what you wanted me to see. That's good! Glad you are around again. :-)
Weeds...
...are maligned, to hell with manicured lawns and Home 'n Garden flower beds, Let the kaleidoscopic world flourish. Voted, natch.
Beautiful!
And funny - Mmmm!
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