the Upside Down

Whew

Yes I would call this very erotic and the great thing is that you did it all with image and sense references. I might move a few line breaks (the ones that end on words like "to" and "on"), but that may just be my preference getting in the way of your poem. Yes you are twisted but you write a hell of a poem. :-)

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What an imagination you have got .... fabulous

You really made my 5 senses respond to this poem as well as making it a believable vignette I can see myself a part of. You always have been part of my boy on boy fantasies. Thanks!

Great!

The first stanza is marvellous - I copied it down.