I think your choice of japanese and American characters is perfect for yur style of writing, her conversation has the perfect lilt. Looking forward to the development of their relationship. Cheers
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same
this is terrific stuff, I am having fun!!
enjoyed the story so far and really looking forward to how it plays out. I hope has a truly has a happy ending.
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Perfect pace
I think your choice of japanese and American characters is perfect for yur style of writing, her conversation has the perfect lilt.
Looking forward to the development of their relationship.
Cheers
Didn't follow the link but, ...
I thought the link left here was an ad - so I reported it. Today I saw a comment that it led to propaganda, so I killed it myself.
I really like where this is goin'.
same
bravo!!
this is terrific stuff, I am having fun!!
Romantic at Heart
enjoyed the story so far and really looking forward to how it plays out. I hope has a truly has a happy ending.
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