I suppose this was too short for most, but then it pretty much said what you wanted it to in the space you used. It was in and of itself a glimpse into the life of two people who share a moment every night. If you are into the voyeur part of life then this was a voyeur moment. For that I say thanks. As for those who knock it... why are you doing that as Anonymous? I think that speaks volumes about you.
English
Horrible!!
Very Nice
Two of my favorite things, well combined! Thanks for the orgasm!
Short, but...
I suppose this was too short for most, but then it pretty much said what you wanted it to in the space you used. It was in and of itself a glimpse into the life of two people who share a moment every night. If you are into the voyeur part of life then this was a voyeur moment. For that I say thanks. As for those who knock it... why are you doing that as Anonymous? I think that speaks volumes about you.
Excellent
Great job, very concise you were able to convey the urge and the longing, and you still left lots for the imagination.
I enjoyed it
I like your stories
defining
This story defines the difference between erotica and pornography.
Anonymous, go elsewhere for porn
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