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Loved it!!
not good
not good
Not my cup of tea....
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I loved how aggressive it was, but I think that you need a better story, more plot, and better POV. If you work on it, you could probably make a series out of it. :)
rubbish tbh
Ok
Fist off there is too much swearing, and 2 nd there is no background of any kind how does she know she has the right girl
This is a stupid story but i had a good laugh though.
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