All Comments on 'Pissed Off Bitch'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
not good

not good

almost_lesbianalmost_lesbianover 12 years ago

Not my cup of tea....

littleoneO_OlittleoneO_Oover 12 years ago
....

I loved how aggressive it was, but I think that you need a better story, more plot, and better POV. If you work on it, you could probably make a series out of it. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

rubbish tbh

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
Ok

Fist off there is too much swearing, and 2 nd there is no background of any kind how does she know she has the right girl

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This is a stupid story but i had a good laugh though.

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