All Comments on 'Arrangement'

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that was not a bad piece, not very descriptive but honestly didnt feel it was a problem, sorta got the vibe of the most manly-literotic piece ive read on here yet! straight forward, real, but it was a nice story too. thanks

I have to say that I really like your writing style. You are a story teller in the true tradition where the tale just rolls along sort of effortlessly with no hard edges to jolt the reader.

Seaside and the Oregon coast, spent a lot of summer days on the coast, but mostly down at Taft. Can't say I was ever in your club, but then when we moved to California, I was just twelve. Last time I was there as a destination, it was Labor Day weekend and that was a mistake, as the entire state of Oregon was also there and it is a small town.

Sweet story well told.

It doesn't raise any issues, or have anything it it that anyone would disagree with. It might have been better to have some dialog on the wife's cheating, but that's something done to death on lw

Thanks for writing another of your fantastic stories. Always feels like listening to an old friend.

All of MGM's work seem light and enjoyable. His characters are all types.

Very good!