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All Comments on 'The Awekening Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

The title isnt spelled right and a lot of the story switched between tenses (past and present). My advice is to get an editor or proofread it more than you have.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Such a good girl

Now give us more, neha ... please continue and tell us how your powers developed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

superb pls continue

wrighterwrighterover 10 years ago
awesum cumsum

the title wasnt that great, but dear u as usual are awesome. i liked this built up. great going dear. looking out for more

fraankhardyfraankhardyover 10 years ago
awesome ...

read all ur submissions ... gud work ... continue ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Chapter 2??

Been waiting for a chapter 2 since ages...hoping a fan will be obliged..

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Looking for roleplay partners for long detailed plays with pictures, storylines, and intense character play.