I am loving this story, can't wait for the next update. Would like to see the chapters become a bit longer as the story progresses, but other then that it was perfection.
'...I erupted like never before, blasting jet after jet across my stomach and chest. I was almost panting as I grabbed my discarded underwear and wiped up the mess.' Bobby's mystery hunk: muscular, 6', straight white teeth, grass green eyes, short cropped brown hair, glistening tan sculpted furry chest. Yum! Nicely crafted chapter. Shells start to crack as characters slowly emerge to reveal their place in the story. Have patience readers.
I like how you are slowly introducing the characters as chesthair said but keep, I shouldn't say that as I am behind and trying to catch up lol but I like it so far
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I am loving this story, can't wait for the next update. Would like to see the chapters become a bit longer as the story progresses, but other then that it was perfection.
Bobby Finds A Mystery Hunk
'...I erupted like never before, blasting jet after jet across my stomach and chest. I was almost panting as I grabbed my discarded underwear and wiped up the mess.' Bobby's mystery hunk: muscular, 6', straight white teeth, grass green eyes, short cropped brown hair, glistening tan sculpted furry chest. Yum! Nicely crafted chapter. Shells start to crack as characters slowly emerge to reveal their place in the story. Have patience readers.
I like how you are slowly introducing the characters as chesthair said but keep, I shouldn't say that as I am behind and trying to catch up lol but I like it so far
Loving it!
I'm loving this story, keep up the good work! Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go devour the rest of the chapters you have posted :)
Miffed resident.
As usual, no love for Newport News.
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