All Comments on 'Swimming Lessons'

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chesthairslavechesthairslaveover 10 years ago
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Excellent, 5 stars! A languid tale turns into a frenzied, orgiastic opus of sex by a pond. The splendid author teases the reader along his erotic and amusing journey. Newer writers, please read this story. 'Swimming Lesson' is a perfect example of PACING.

nanobotnanobotover 10 years ago
Another gem

Summer lovin' indeed. Like those pulp novels we love, threat implied and danger skirted. Nice foreshadowing and resolution. I never tire of your style.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...