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by Anonymous

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by chesthairslave08/22/13

Male Maenads

Excellent, 5 stars! A languid tale turns into a frenzied, orgiastic opus of sex by a pond. The splendid author teases the reader along his erotic and amusing journey. Newer writers, please read this story. 'Swimming Lesson' is a perfect example of PACING.

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by nanobot08/23/13

Another gem

Summer lovin' indeed. Like those pulp novels we love, threat implied and danger skirted. Nice foreshadowing and resolution. I never tire of your style.

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by 4glory608/23/13

Keeping it Up

Both keeping it up for the gay guys and keeping the great stories coming for the rest of us. Loved both the buildup and the 'almost.'

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