A "Jewel" of a Wife

nicely done

one more unfaithful slut getting justice

2 ATTORNEYS WITHOUT Q & A, WHICH IS THEIR STOCK

and cheaters never win....this deserves an epilog or part 2. TK U MLJ LV NV

Not finished.

Curiosity

I guess since it was such a focal point of he story towards the end I'm wondering what the two lovers thought they could say to explain things. Nice when karma works against egotists.

Slick

Excellent revenge. Some may read and say everything was unwarranted. Some might say it needs a sequel. I say once the whore cheated all bets were off. Actually it think it might have been easier to kill them and dispose of their cheating carcasses but that's just the evil coming out of me. Either way fuck 'em. Let them rot in jail.

OH YEAH
Ha

Vivid Imagination

Nice tale. Previous commenters said it needs an epilogue or chapter 2. I agree. The gist and moral of the story: cheaters should never prosper. In this case, couldn't have happened to a nicer pair. Hey Jack! Can you spell Bubba? LOL
Enjoyed this one. Thanks.

Great story

Like previous commenters wrote a 2nd part is needed.
Call me a wimp, but I have the feeling that Arlene is sincerely sorry about what happenned and a reconciliation was possible, mostly because they have young kids and because I thinks she really care.
Although the fact that she did not stop on the 4th night and even threatened her husband sealed her fate, ina way she was difficult to understand. I guess that cheaters who profess love to their SO are really hard to understand.

A follow up would be great.

Leave it as is

I get people being curious about what possible explanation the wife and her pal could have, but come on... it would have all been self-serving crap.
This is fine as it stands.
A five.

FullCuckold56 got betrayed

in the cornhole, internet 'hard men' like betrayed have very well-used cornholes - spending all day every day reading and commenting on cheating wife stories doesn't make you a bad ass, it makes you a piece of ass.

well thought out, well plan attack

she planned on dropping the bomb on him.....so he did the right thing......5stars

not a Matt Moreau story so

wtf are doing here cuckdogg? Go back to reading your favorite author, illiterate cuckboy.

Good Planning

A well thought out story of revenge and good eye for detail.

It would have good to know what the chat was going to be about from his wife and lover.
It seemed she did not want a divorce and still wanted her husband. Also her lover mentioned that after the talk he would be out of their lives !

So was this a once in a life time fling or a business fuck between two professional people sealing a deal or promotion !

We still need to know her motives, so perhaps a follow up story from her perspective ?

Also Curious

Great story. Loved the planning and detail that went into the frame.

But I also wonder about why. I mean what possible reason would there be to say that an explanation of a this would get their lives back? I agree that there was never a chance for them after her exit comment about the kids. But it seems there was more to it than the obvious.

Nice!

Thanks for sharing.

Brilliant!

Awesome - Now THAT's what I call a Happy Ending!

Great read

Very enjoyable story. Thanks or sharing it!

Now THAT was a well thought out revenge!

You must be a fan of the CSI crime shows! I loved this story as a strong revenge plot. Someone might criticize you for being light on the emotion, or wishing there had been more from wife's point of view. However, I think that his limited POV was the exact right angle for this narrative, in order to build the mystery surrounding the case. I really enjoyed this, and think that this was some of your best work that I have read of your stuff. 5stars for sure!!! Thanks!!

I couldn't even cast a vote

Not one single speck of emotion in this story, just string of "fix the bitch" BS.

Fabulous!

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Everything I could say has already been said.

Blatant adultery & sly C.S.I. tech utilization !

Don't mess with a Gus Grissom wannabe. The depth of characters were more then a scosh shallow, but that doesn't seem to have hurt the CSI franchise. I'm giving a reluctant five stars because a lot of thought went into plot and resolution.

The human element was underserved but this author is very talented and will hopefully address that factor next time out.

Fun read even though not really believable

In my opinion the way Austen was able to so successfully frame Arlene and Traylor with planted fingerprints and the prefectly made duplicate keys and the actress who was able to so easily impersonate Arlene, even to renting the storage cube, was so incredible as to not pass muster. Also, as others have pointed out, there are too many witnesses, the actress, her boyfriend and the babysitter who got an extra $100 to stay quiet, and eventually one of them will either threaten Austen with telling the story unless he pays up or else will let something slip by mistake.

But, this is a STORY, imhapless's story, so I'm willing to suspend reality to a degree and I found I enjoyed it. I give it 4*s.

Thanks and keep writing!

I am a fan of CSI, but...

it is a little hard to believe some of the aspects of the story. Security all around the brother in-law's house yet there's a blind spot large enough for a person to get away from the house and back in without being caught by the cameras, no way! That's why I gave it a 4*. It was a good story though.
I also think there needs to be a follow up; but from Arlene's point of view. There is no "good" reason to cheat, but a loving wife like Arlene seemed to be, must have been under some out side pressure to jeopardize her marriage by cheating.

Good story......

Thanks.

Thorough BTB story

But lots of plot holes, as Statestreet pointed out. One need only follow the money (strategic cash withdrawals by our hero (to pay his accomplices), lots of said accomplices, any of whom could reverse the outcome resulting in hubby in jail, not the cheater. Plus, there were so many steps where absolutely nothing went wrong. Half the time, a duplicate key doesn't work right; amazing all the keys worked perfectly in this story, but of course, in a story the author controls such even to the point of unbelievability. Still, a captivating read and pretty well written.

5*

A great and fun read :)

Frame jobs only work in fiction ... that's why it's fiction, people.

I guess if people want to argue the details of the criminal justice, they can. But, still, it's in the same vein that I see in every story comment on this site ... it's fiction people ... it's a freaking fantasy. Fantasies aren't bound by the limits of reality. There's a reason Shakespeare's Winter's Tale has people landing on the coastline of Bohemia (which was actually landlocked). What matters is the fun of the story. This was a fun story. It's also a btb fantasy. If you really want it to be doable, that means you're looking for ideas. In which case, you need help. Women are people and no one should do these things to anyone in real life, whether they could do it successfully or not. Keep it fiction. Fun fiction, but FICTION!

Reminded me of...

Leverage or Mission: Impossible (The old TV series, not the fucked up Tom Cruise bullshit movies). Hubby got some damn good revenge there. BTB Done Right!


5 HUGE Stars!

HAHAHA U CRAZY!!!

I like it,I really like it!!! That was a brilliant and well thought out revenge, the best part of it is that in a divorce the courts almost always side with a cheating wife and this guy turned the legal system(something she specializes in and counted on to keep him submissive) against her. He wasn't even needlessly ruthless in my opinion he gave her every chance to rethink her actions and stop or at least take his deal. SHE HAS NO GOOD REASON TO CHEAT! He appears to be a great father and husband plus they have good sex together, she got greedy and wanted to cuckold him. If u hav a problem with your spouse THEN FLIPPING TELL THEM BEFORE YOU DECIDE TO CHEAT OR DIVORCE!!! anyway Im rambling 5/5!

A solid 5 *

To quote an anom "it's fiction people ... it's a freaking fantasy" and a very good one!

Great read

A complex plan, well thought out. Obviously, there are holes in the plan, but easy to overlook. I've been overlooking the fact that kryptonite doesn't exist for over 60 years so this didn't take much of a stretch.

Thanks for a fun read.

good writing

Glad you didn't give us a page and a half of how we met BS. Also we don't need the wife's side, leave it as is.

ok

Well done story. Too bad you have to go to these lengths, but our laws today really put the screws to men in divorce actions unless there is a pre nup and that better be well written.

Clever and Interesting Story

The punishment fit the crime. Five stars; well done!

I intensely dislike stories about how clever the husband is at committing multiple felonies, making his kids accessories to the same crimes, treat the people helping him like shit by using them to cover for him and basically throwing all logic to the wind with a few lame explanations at the end. Why do I dislike them?

Because in addition to the they rely on the cops being complete fucking morons who will openly and happily stand up on the witness stand and proclaim that the mastermind could never have done it. They "never suspected a thing" despite the fact that he had the most likely motive and was the first to start pointing fingers about an inside job. Give me a fucking break. Cops aren't idiots.

His kids are going to accept what he did when they grow up and jewelry and unaccounted for money starts showing up? Only if they're bigger cunts than his wife is..

Well done, author.

Always like a good revenge on a cheating spouse story.

Nice

what a nice scam on a cheating wife!

Not that good

I would have liked to hear what the wife intended to say when she had her boyfriend come to the house, and why she thought she could get away with such an obvious affair. Why was she bothering to fuck her husband so well on Thursdays, and share what she had learned, and then disrespect him so blatantly? I'm not suggesting that the husband should have tolerated her behaviour, but it is always more interesting to read convincing dialogue and emotion than to read this kind of stuff.

Enjoyed it

A bit wooden, but clever nevertheless.

Enjoyed it

I would like to hear explanation, too. Especially when she brought the lover home...

Nothing to explain.

Wifey cheated. Wifey got caught. The excuses weren't important.. They were just going to spout bullshit, not that it matters. Hubby did the right thing by not listening to their bullshit. There is NO EXCUSE for cheating. Zero Tolerance.

A tiny bit contrived, but a great ride.

5 stars anyway, and not just because in this fantasy, the lead character defeated the socialist-feminist bureaucracy that robs us all of the power to defend ourselves when we are being betrayed (and he didn't kill anybody)!

In this case, he proved that 'no, we really don't have "Something to talk about"...

Sorry

I like 'commensurate' BTB as much as most assholes! Framing the mother of your children for something she didn't do (and permanently ruin her professional life and future earning-capacity) is NOT commensurate by ANY stretch of imagination! She fucked some lucky swinging-dick? Lucky Bull, shame on Sweetie, and where did Hubby go wrong that she was tempted to 'go there?'

Put Oil of Wintergreen in the lube in her purse Thursday night (AFTER your mercy orgy!) That will punish Bull more than he probably deserves, but Sweetie just right! Maybe go over to his place that Friday night and take the valves out of her four tires or super-glue all of her car doors, or just call a wrecker and tell them to tow her car to the dealer's lot to be 'fixed' the next day! That will screw up her home-return plans and expose and inconvenience her ass. Yeah, you'll share custody, but nothing in this story documents her being a bad mother! Unacceptable as your wife, sure, but not bad mommy! Hubby will not raise them by himself as well as the two of them would, even if separately.

Good tale!

Nice to read a cuck free tale yet again! But i find the revenge so much sweeter when U good authors spin a good tale of bullshit from the wife as to why she did it. Chapter2?

Good revenge but needs to be finished

Great job with a creative revenge scenario but you really should have included the explanation from the wife as to why. You created questions about her Thursday behavior and then left the reader hanging. 4 stars because of this.

There IS a reason for a Chapter 2...

However, that reason would be to hook Hubby up with the hot Detective June Grayson. I'd like to see that, actually. Looked like a bit of a lost opportunity in this one.

Still an awesome read!

A bit over the top

Burn the cheat,ruin her and send her to jail. A little to much. I think the author could have choice a different path here , so she was a self centered female,why did she cheat and make it so obvious to him. She was the loving wife till that moment in time she came up with that lame story of going out with the team. I am sure he could have fiqured a way to nail her without all this elaborate planning to destroy her completely. She did need some punishment for her behavior and the no fault courts would make him pay .

I have to agree with anon...

If you're not going to answer the question, don't ask it. Why did you stage that whole scene about the two of them meeting you and them wanting to talk so desperately, him saying he'd give him his life back...if you weren't going to tell us about it. You would have gotten an easy 5 from me if you had explained that, as it was I fought between a 3 and a 4 finally settling on the 4, but barely.

Arrogant cheat does not equal good moral compass for raising daughters

I think he got her back just right. If she had such a "good" reason for her blatant infidelity, why didn't she show an ounce of remorse when they had their talk? She was the one in the wrong, your life with hubby so bad you need someone else? try to work it out first, then get a divorce. Plus he gave her the chance to keep her law license and stay out of jail. Had she cared about being a good mommy she would have thought about how her actions could affect her children. The selfish whore got what was coming to her. Had it been him cheating and her getting revenge, it would still be good. You take vows, keep them. If the relationship isn't working out deal with it before bringing other people into the train wreck that is your life.

Dear readers -- from imhapless

Wow; this may be the first time I posted a story in the Loving Wives section where someone didn't tell me that I was a moron, should no longer write stories, or I should kill myself. I must be losing my touch (ha, ha).

Anyway, to those of you who think the story had too many holes, I guess I needed to explain more, such as since the husband was a V P of a public company that he made payments to the actress and her boyfriend from a business account that would never be traced to him, or that he tested the keys he made with the impressioning clay until he got them right. I thought readers would like to fill in their own details. Anyway, I honestly think that this story was way more believable with many fewer holes than any James Bond Movie and 99% of CSI type dramas on TV. Well, at least that's what I think.

Considering the comments AND feedback that I've gotten it seems that I really disturbed many of you by putting in the line for Jack Traylor of "Just listen for two minutes and you'll get your life back." Sorry, I guess I'm a sadist because that was intentional. What fun is it for you to have everything laid out for you -- you need to exercise your own imagination. While I definitely have something in mind, what you come up with will work better for you than what I put in there.

As for writing a sequel of answering questions -- be my guest, take the story and go with it. I, however, decline to do that because I like it the way it is and I write for my own enjoyment in addition to hopefully entertaining readers.

P.S. Won't SOMEBODY please write a comment like "eat shit and die." The postings will be incomplete without that!

EAT SHIT AND DIE!

There. Your wish has been fulfilled. :D

Seriously, though. Great job on this on, Hap!