Great tale.. just discovered your writing and am now reading many of your tales.... loving the humor and at the same time making it erotic..Good Work
Not believable
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Both erotic and humorous
Great tale.. just discovered your writing and am now reading many of your tales.... loving the humor and at the same time making it erotic..Good Work
Not believable
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