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Exhibitionist Sister

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by Rawmaster5008/23/13

Hot

not original but still hot. The older sister driving the action is in character with her desires and younger brother losing brain cells when seeing a nude or semi-nude female is also in character. The shows at the mall were sexy and her awareness made it more so. Not classic story but a classic theme, done very well. 5 stars. maybe not realistic, but it is fantasy.
Remembering my sisters

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by Eric_Shift08/23/13

Very nice

A real nice fantasy bring asked to help a hottie to show off

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by Anonymous08/23/13

Fun story

More often sister just like to tease bro and make him JO.

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by NateBlack08/23/13

Fantastic Story!

Really enjoyed it! Find myself looking for more.

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by Anonymous08/24/13

good! maybe you could do another installment and have the mom be a exhibitionist too!

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by larry7440308/24/13

Mom should catch them doing it.

And just quietly watch.

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by Anonymous08/24/13

5 stars

Got me hard! If I were the neighbor, I would be jerking off. This story made me realize that I have some exhibitionist in me. I love to take my t-shirt off on my daily walks and love to see the women drivers staring at me as they drive by. I'm 68 years old but look O.K. if you don't look too closely. And, at 30 to 40 m.p.h., they don't have much time to look. The only worry I have is when one of the cars starts heading for me. My luck, however, has held out; and they've always pulled back into the driving lane. As they pass me (if they bother to even look at my face), they see a big smile because I know they were looking. Once a couple of young women in a car almost missed going on a red light because they were watching me and not the light. Maybe one of them will stop some day and ...! Well, I guess I can dream! Check me out on Clinton Street as you head into Concord.

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by sabra1602308/24/13

Good story

Let's keep this baby rolling with more chapters. Thanks

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by TheEldestBrother08/24/13

Very Nice!!

Excellently written, great story and very attractive! Good stuff! Keep it up!

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by LongTongue4208/24/13

Awesome story. Want more like it.

Ashley is awesome,will make some lucky man a great wife. A wife who will love swinging with other couples or just MFM 3somes. Hell maybe even getting into FMF 3ways. Is there anything hotter than a wife who enjoys eating pussy as much as sucking cock. Take these Ashley stories as far as you can. LT

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by peebudy08/24/13

lovely!

great story. well written. believable. I loved the dialogue and how nasty the sister was. 5 stars for sure!

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by Anonymous08/24/13

Next: The Internet

Will Ashley film her activities and post them on the internet to get feed back? It could be an interesting path to follow.

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by dutch51308/24/13

T.F.H.

To Freaken Hot ! That was a good one hope you plan on another chapter . Just made my favorite story list !!!

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by RaySun08/24/13

Bunch of Dirrty, Filthy ...

Hot Awesomeness!
Loved it! Great work, HeyAll.

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by Anonymous08/24/13

It was only two chapters long, but I came pretty hard.

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by AlwaysHungry08/25/13

Good dialogue

The dialogue was well written. That's something that is often overlooked by Literotica writers.

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by Privates1stClass08/26/13

Hot!

Hot for Mr Jenkins, too. Great story. Good luck in the Summer Lovin' contest.

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by RecHiker09/06/13

Exceptional

Well put together story and kept me interested all the way through.
Thaknks for sharing. 5 stars +

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by prop6909/07/13

FANTASTIC

Hope you continue the series.

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by Anonymous10/29/13

That was really hot! Was the brother shaved too? If so, hopefully she licked his shaved balls for him while she was sucking him right before he fucked her!

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by TnPantyThief11/12/13

Well composed dialogue

It's been said already before me but along with being kinky and hot the dialogue between the 2 was very natural. Kinda quick and snappy like it would be between brother and sister. Good job!

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by DashDot12/26/13

Very hot

Seemed like a natural progression of siblings discovering their sexuality together like so many do.

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by Anonymous01/26/14

Expertly Written

That was one of the best stories I've ever read. So many of these stories I read are cheesy, forced, rushed, and written with poor grammar and mechanics. This not only read fluently, it also seemed natural and flowed evenly. Another thing you nailed was the exposition. What really makes or breaks a piece is often the level of detail expressed at the start. I loved the way that the details were explained patiently. Hats off to you, and I hope you continue writing.

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by Anonymous06/05/14

Bravo!

You're an excellent writer!

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by Anonymous08/09/14

amazing

i have an older sister too and i always watch her ge tout of the shower and tan in our backyard! she is soo hot and i wanna fuck her but it will probably never happen...great story! reminded me alot of me and my sister obviously without the sex

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by Anonymous08/30/14

believable

its outrageous, but believable. You stuck ti the characters personalities and hit on the primary driver that makes people like these stories: the thrill of taboo.

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by Anonymous11/22/14

wonderful

Great sister ! I could use one like her ! I would be in heaven.....
need more of this story, he has not sucked her off yet ! Keep going...

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by jonyoungau01/25/15

Yeah hope there would of been more of them naked out in public.

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by Anonymous01/28/15

Longer Stories Please!

Your writing is very enjoyable, but would be better if they were longer. Thanks

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by auhunter0409/20/15

please continue

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by Anonymous11/12/15

Been there...still doing that !

My older sister and I were always naked together growing up and were both exhibitionists. My sister not only sucked and fucked me she brought her friends around to do the same. She helped me convince my to be wife to never wear underwear and to always be naked in front of our friends. She was doing nude pizza type dares before they became popular. Exhibitionism makes people want to keep in shape so they look good to others. BARE469

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by Anonymous06/29/16

Fucking my brother

Reading this story made me so hot that I walked into my brother's room. Naked. And sucked his hard cock and then rode him till he came in my pussy.

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by thebug3709/21/16

The Neighbor. . .

. . .assuredly was next to be treated by the neighbor girl he checked out totally in the buff. He got a young girl, she got a five incher from her voyeur neighbor. You, the author, gets five stars. Brother got lots more of. . .

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by blackknight31402/02/17

Very hot and sexy.

We all wish we had a sister like this. I bet even the women reading this have the same wish, about their sister.

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