All Comments on 'Exhibitionist Sister'

not original but still hot. The older sister driving the action is in character with her desires and younger brother losing brain cells when seeing a nude or semi-nude female is also in character. The shows at the mall were sexy and her awareness made it more so. Not classic story but a classic theme, done very well. 5 stars. maybe not realistic, but it is fantasy.

Remembering my sisters

A real nice fantasy bring asked to help a hottie to show off

More often sister just like to tease bro and make him JO.

Really enjoyed it! Find myself looking for more.

good! maybe you could do another installment and have the mom be a exhibitionist too!

And just quietly watch.

Got me hard! If I were the neighbor, I would be jerking off. This story made me realize that I have some exhibitionist in me. I love to take my t-shirt off on my daily walks and love to see the women drivers staring at me as they drive by. I'm 68 years old but look O.K. if you don't look too closely. And, at 30 to 40 m.p.h., they don't have much time to look. The only worry I have is when one of the cars starts heading for me. My luck, however, has held out; and they've always pulled back into the driving lane. As they pass me (if they bother to even look at my face), they see a big smile because I know they were looking. Once a couple of young women in a car almost missed going on a red light because they were watching me and not the light. Maybe one of them will stop some day and ...! Well, I guess I can dream! Check me out on Clinton Street as you head into Concord.

Let's keep this baby rolling with more chapters. Thanks

Excellently written, great story and very attractive! Good stuff! Keep it up!

Ashley is awesome,will make some lucky man a great wife. A wife who will love swinging with other couples or just MFM 3somes. Hell maybe even getting into FMF 3ways. Is there anything hotter than a wife who enjoys eating pussy as much as sucking cock. Take these Ashley stories as far as you can. LT

great story. well written. believable. I loved the dialogue and how nasty the sister was. 5 stars for sure!

Will Ashley film her activities and post them on the internet to get feed back? It could be an interesting path to follow.

To Freaken Hot ! That was a good one hope you plan on another chapter . Just made my favorite story list !!!

Hot Awesomeness!

Loved it! Great work, HeyAll.

It was only two chapters long, but I came pretty hard.

The dialogue was well written. That's something that is often overlooked by Literotica writers.

Hot for Mr Jenkins, too. Great story. Good luck in the Summer Lovin' contest.

Well put together story and kept me interested all the way through.

Thaknks for sharing. 5 stars +

Hope you continue the series.

That was really hot! Was the brother shaved too? If so, hopefully she licked his shaved balls for him while she was sucking him right before he fucked her!

It's been said already before me but along with being kinky and hot the dialogue between the 2 was very natural. Kinda quick and snappy like it would be between brother and sister. Good job!

Seemed like a natural progression of siblings discovering their sexuality together like so many do.

That was one of the best stories I've ever read. So many of these stories I read are cheesy, forced, rushed, and written with poor grammar and mechanics. This not only read fluently, it also seemed natural and flowed evenly. Another thing you nailed was the exposition. What really makes or breaks a piece is often the level of detail expressed at the start. I loved the way that the details were explained patiently. Hats off to you, and I hope you continue writing.

You're an excellent writer!

i have an older sister too and i always watch her ge tout of the shower and tan in our backyard! she is soo hot and i wanna fuck her but it will probably never happen...great story! reminded me alot of me and my sister obviously without the sex

its outrageous, but believable. You stuck ti the characters personalities and hit on the primary driver that makes people like these stories: the thrill of taboo.

Great sister ! I could use one like her ! I would be in heaven.....

need more of this story, he has not sucked her off yet ! Keep going...

Yeah hope there would of been more of them naked out in public.

Your writing is very enjoyable, but would be better if they were longer. Thanks

please continue

My older sister and I were always naked together growing up and were both exhibitionists. My sister not only sucked and fucked me she brought her friends around to do the same. She helped me convince my to be wife to never wear underwear and to always be naked in front of our friends. She was doing nude pizza type dares before they became popular. Exhibitionism makes people want to keep in shape so they look good to others. BARE469

Reading this story made me so hot that I walked into my brother's room. Naked. And sucked his hard cock and then rode him till he came in my pussy.

. . .assuredly was next to be treated by the neighbor girl he checked out totally in the buff. He got a young girl, she got a five incher from her voyeur neighbor. You, the author, gets five stars. Brother got lots more of. . .

We all wish we had a sister like this. I bet even the women reading this have the same wish, about their sister.

Great story hopefully there will be more chapters to come.

Wow, another great story. I was so turned on by this thinking of it being me and my sister, although she is younger than I am. I have wanted and have fantasized about her sucking my cock, me eating her after sucking on her huge tits before I fuck her. I love your writing keep it up.

Please continue the story. There are so many possibilities.

Great story, you set the stage for the brother an sister in act 1. Now on to act 2...

Nicely done. Ashley is hotness.

Liked the first part of the story, in the food court, more than the second, when they had sex.

She exposing herself to the lady, with her brother sitting around: this is really hot.

Thank you!

I could only wish for such sister. Very nice story.

Definitely need several more stories of JUST how hot Ashley is.

amazing

I was expecting Mr. Jenkins to come over to borrow a cup of sugar, and to "find" Ashley start naked and dripping cum all over the place, but of course that's too over the top. What a super hot story! 5* ~~ JB Edwards

Great job writing a really exciting short story. Hard to do that in a 2-pager.

Wow again. It's plausible that Ashley, being the exibitionist, took the lead. Still, her brother could have shown some initiative and gone down on her to reciprocate for the blowjobs. But this still easily deserves 5 stars, I have read this story, like many of HeyAll's, several times. Still enjoing them.

I loved your story! I am a bit of an exhibitionist myself. It is especially appealing as I like the sibling incest theme. Actually I love all incest related stories as I have engaged in a little bit of incest myself. I hope to see many more quality stories like this one.

Ashley is not only an exhibitionist, she's also seems to be somewhat of a nympho. Her necessity for sex constantly speaks of it. Anyway it was a damn hot story. Could have gone on to a few more pages, maybe with her brother in her ass, and Mr. Jenkins joining in.