I've suspected for a while that your writing is similar to one of my favorite writers on literotica. Now I'm conviced that you are him. You threw me off the trail a little with how dark you got in your literature, but i've recently seen my favorite author go through a kind of dark faze a little while back, so I know he can get really extreme. There is no way that you can write so eerily similar and in such a consistent manner with what he does and not be him. I'm not gonna say who you really are in my comments considering how much trouble you went through to cloak your identity. I kind of like how you are finishing up some of the other quality writer's stories. I get it, you can get as extreme as you want without catching flak under your other name. Though some of the stories are a little too dark IMHO, but no matter how dark you sometimes get with your stories, you're still a romantic at heart and that always shines through in your writing. I'm gonna leave it here, just know that I am on to you, but it'll be our little secret ;)
Thanks, catch you on twitter miss Silver766.
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Anonymous08/28/13
why, is guy really this self destructive
only way i would touch any of those sluts is with a shotgun
and wow, tested for STDs and AIDS and report back same day, really stupid, that test meant u didnt have em 6 months to a year ago
The last chapter was submitted a week ago. I'm not sure what's taking so long. It may have something to do with the Summer Lovin' contest starting. I don't know. The story is still pending in my queue, and has not been rejected. Maybe it will go up tonight.
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Anonymous12/07/13
lunacy
Marriage? ......no wonder the divorce rate is over fifty percent. These are the most fucked up characters I've ever read about Kill them all and burn the corpses. Destroy any trace of their DNA.
I love it when an author can take the reader from rooting for the demise of this relationship to now hoping they reconcile. Not only did you convince the guy, you convinced me. That is compelling, authentic writing, and takes great skill. Five stars.
Credit to FTDS: I find myself torn about how I want things to go at this point.
On one hand, the Anon from just a few comments ago got it right: these characters are FUCKED up. The amount of lies, betrayal, and just plain drama makes me think that the best thing to happen to Damon is for him to move to another country and forget he knew any of the folks involved.
On the other hand, DrBeamer is right: the way that FTDS has written Lacey makes me wonder if maybe reconciliation could possibly work. There's a small part of me that is actually hoping that Damon will give her another chance.
"No, but I had a date. I think he would have been a little ticked off if you bought me a drink” – EXACTLY, and that’s why he didn’t buy Donna a drink, he didn’t want to piss off what he THOUGHT was HER date!
He has to be careful what he tells family and friends just in case they DO reconcile, he doesn’t want her actions to affect her relationships with them. Hell, even if they DON’T reconcile, it looks like they’re going to still be friends, and so she may still have to deal with his family and friends!
"I gave him her number, your house number, and your address.” – I had wondered how he got her number!
“The way she talked, the disrespect she showed you, I couldn't stand that." – So she could have warned him about the Deal, so that he could have been prepared, and probably NOT agreed to it.
“I thought she did deserve better. Maybe I was wrong." – “Maybe”?!
I can ALMOST see reconciliation, seeing how they were set up, but she STILL broke the deal giving Brett her ass, then getting pissed about Jenna, who was never really part of the deal, which was voided by the anal with Brett anyway.
English
Ok I'm convinced.
I've suspected for a while that your writing is similar to one of my favorite writers on literotica. Now I'm conviced that you are him. You threw me off the trail a little with how dark you got in your literature, but i've recently seen my favorite author go through a kind of dark faze a little while back, so I know he can get really extreme. There is no way that you can write so eerily similar and in such a consistent manner with what he does and not be him. I'm not gonna say who you really are in my comments considering how much trouble you went through to cloak your identity. I kind of like how you are finishing up some of the other quality writer's stories. I get it, you can get as extreme as you want without catching flak under your other name. Though some of the stories are a little too dark IMHO, but no matter how dark you sometimes get with your stories, you're still a romantic at heart and that always shines through in your writing. I'm gonna leave it here, just know that I am on to you, but it'll be our little secret ;)
Thanks, catch you on twitter miss Silver766.
why, is guy really this self destructive
only way i would touch any of those sluts is with a shotgun
and wow, tested for STDs and AIDS and report back same day, really stupid, that test meant u didnt have em 6 months to a year ago
Ftds
You didn't.
Is day 7 the last day?
Aghhh - I want more, it doesn't seem to be concluded to me!
finish
do the end of the story
The last Chapter
The last chapter was submitted a week ago. I'm not sure what's taking so long. It may have something to do with the Summer Lovin' contest starting. I don't know. The story is still pending in my queue, and has not been rejected. Maybe it will go up tonight.
lunacy
Marriage? ......no wonder the divorce rate is over fifty percent. These are the most fucked up characters I've ever read about Kill them all and burn the corpses. Destroy any trace of their DNA.
Loving it
I love it when an author can take the reader from rooting for the demise of this relationship to now hoping they reconcile. Not only did you convince the guy, you convinced me. That is compelling, authentic writing, and takes great skill. Five stars.
Cue the music
Dah-dun-DUMMM
The Thlot Pickens
Credit to FTDS: I find myself torn about how I want things to go at this point.
On one hand, the Anon from just a few comments ago got it right: these characters are FUCKED up. The amount of lies, betrayal, and just plain drama makes me think that the best thing to happen to Damon is for him to move to another country and forget he knew any of the folks involved.
On the other hand, DrBeamer is right: the way that FTDS has written Lacey makes me wonder if maybe reconciliation could possibly work. There's a small part of me that is actually hoping that Damon will give her another chance.
Regardless, this has been an entertaining series!
NOW ITS SPY AND COUNTER SPY
and triple agents on both sides, TK U MLJ LV NV
Many Thoughts
"No, but I had a date. I think he would have been a little ticked off if you bought me a drink” – EXACTLY, and that’s why he didn’t buy Donna a drink, he didn’t want to piss off what he THOUGHT was HER date!
He has to be careful what he tells family and friends just in case they DO reconcile, he doesn’t want her actions to affect her relationships with them. Hell, even if they DON’T reconcile, it looks like they’re going to still be friends, and so she may still have to deal with his family and friends!
"I gave him her number, your house number, and your address.” – I had wondered how he got her number!
“The way she talked, the disrespect she showed you, I couldn't stand that." – So she could have warned him about the Deal, so that he could have been prepared, and probably NOT agreed to it.
“I thought she did deserve better. Maybe I was wrong." – “Maybe”?!
I can ALMOST see reconciliation, seeing how they were set up, but she STILL broke the deal giving Brett her ass, then getting pissed about Jenna, who was never really part of the deal, which was voided by the anal with Brett anyway.
Second time through
I just don't get why this guy is still hung up on what happened, given what now knows, and given how he himself has behaved.
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