I'm moving to Tennessee today! Holy flaming shit. Why is it male authors love to surround the LONE guy with wall to wall bombastic females? OK...dumb question. 'Cause I loved this one! Dani, Sam, and last but not least, Lydia, a nonrelated bonny Scotish lass, with the greatest ass. Different and hotter than the sun. Good show...
Loved it! Funny how the inspector went from some highschool girl he couldnt remember to the love of his life, (humorously) talking marriage inside of an hour! ;)
Fun plotline though; I had suspected that the girls had 'set him up' by having her do te inspection. Nice to know I was wrong and got a surprise!! :)
For fun contemplation though... I dont see their world coming to an end even if the lady had freaked and ran out of the house. Other than rumors spreading through the community the cops wouldnt / couldnt do anything. What proof? (No babies to dna test, heh). ...it would go like this: 'I wouldn't date her in highschool and sheshows up on a job here and were both surprised. Sheputs the moves on me and I turn her down again. She feels spurned and hurt, swears revenge and then starts accusing me of fucking my sisters!? Gross! Thats sick-o! She needs a head shrink your honor! Were barely over the trama of our parents death and now this insult added to injury! (Judge throws out case and weekend jails the offending redhead and fines her while putting a restraining order on her)
...and they fucked happily ever after ;)
Lol. Anyways thanks for writing the fun, enjoyable story!!
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Anonymous12/10/13
I loved it
I know for sure that I hadn't read pt#2, so I must've read the first a l-o-n-g time ago
And of course; I was correct, they couldn't always get away with "playing Hide & Seek". Yes; your twist saved it, but readers couldn't have anticipated all of those details. So let's see; Inspector gets changed at the last second, happens to be an old schoolmate that the sisters knew v-e-r-y well and that said inspector was v-e-r-y interested in all of them in many ways, etc...
If Part 3 of Triplets 2: A Game of Risk wasn't such a good story I'd have been greatly disappointed. Nightshadow tells a good story.
But there are spelling errors and plurals where there should be possessives. You need MS Word, which would have helped you with its spelling and grammar tool.
Or, you need an editor. I am registered with Literotica as an editor. I'd love to help.
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Anonymous08/15/15
So insanely hot
Totally mind blowing,pure fuck lust all the way,pure headonistic sex pleasure fucking and sucking till they pass out then straight back in. Oh that I Could join in.
your story got me so wet hahaha really hot though at first i dont think the idea with Lydia would be good but as i read along i like the way it ended, i just hope that Lydia and Jake did not really got married i mean the three of them together hahaha really nice as in good ending
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Anonymous07/18/16
no marriage
The four of these characters deserve each other and i don't believe that getting married is the right decision. But maybe it is if the writer can give us some more exciting moments. Thanks for your good work
English
I read this trio of tales once before...
...and it's still as good, now, then it was THEN altho I had forgotten the ending! I think I read them as they 'CAME' out!
SEXCELLENT
I read them all, I loved them all. Great writing, keep it up.
babe heaven
I'm moving to Tennessee today! Holy flaming shit. Why is it male authors love to surround the LONE guy with wall to wall bombastic females? OK...dumb question. 'Cause I loved this one! Dani, Sam, and last but not least, Lydia, a nonrelated bonny Scotish lass, with the greatest ass. Different and hotter than the sun. Good show...
Wonderful Tale with Wonderful Tails
I have now read all of your stories and have loved them all. Thankyou so much for some really well crafted tales.
awesome.. unbelievable... hot!!
the stories were beautifully crafted and written.. i loved it!! WOW~!
LOL
LOLOLOLOLOL
Whats a brother to do? ahaahahahahaa!!!!
great story man.
MOAR!!!!
You absolutely NEED to write more! Such good writing. I could even hear her accent
I now remember reading this before...
It must have been quite a while back. An excellent story with plenty of hot sex and a modicum of good romance, too. Thank you for writing.
:)
Loved it! Funny how the inspector went from some highschool girl he couldnt remember to the love of his life, (humorously) talking marriage inside of an hour! ;)
Fun plotline though; I had suspected that the girls had 'set him up' by having her do te inspection. Nice to know I was wrong and got a surprise!! :)
For fun contemplation though... I dont see their world coming to an end even if the lady had freaked and ran out of the house. Other than rumors spreading through the community the cops wouldnt / couldnt do anything. What proof? (No babies to dna test, heh). ...it would go like this: 'I wouldn't date her in highschool and sheshows up on a job here and were both surprised. Sheputs the moves on me and I turn her down again. She feels spurned and hurt, swears revenge and then starts accusing me of fucking my sisters!? Gross! Thats sick-o! She needs a head shrink your honor! Were barely over the trama of our parents death and now this insult added to injury! (Judge throws out case and weekend jails the offending redhead and fines her while putting a restraining order on her)
...and they fucked happily ever after ;)
Lol. Anyways thanks for writing the fun, enjoyable story!!
I loved it
I know for sure that I hadn't read pt#2, so I must've read the first a l-o-n-g time ago
And of course; I was correct, they couldn't always get away with "playing Hide & Seek". Yes; your twist saved it, but readers couldn't have anticipated all of those details. So let's see; Inspector gets changed at the last second, happens to be an old schoolmate that the sisters knew v-e-r-y well and that said inspector was v-e-r-y interested in all of them in many ways, etc...
DKP
Almost Perfect
If Part 3 of Triplets 2: A Game of Risk wasn't such a good story I'd have been greatly disappointed. Nightshadow tells a good story.
But there are spelling errors and plurals where there should be possessives. You need MS Word, which would have helped you with its spelling and grammar tool.
Or, you need an editor. I am registered with Literotica as an editor. I'd love to help.
So insanely hot
Totally mind blowing,pure fuck lust all the way,pure headonistic sex pleasure fucking and sucking till they pass out then straight back in. Oh that I Could join in.
Great story so far
WOW, This story is getting better and better with each chapter, absolutely love it.cant wait to read the next chapter.
wow really imporved
your story got me so wet hahaha really hot though at first i dont think the idea with Lydia would be good but as i read along i like the way it ended, i just hope that Lydia and Jake did not really got married i mean the three of them together hahaha really nice as in good ending
no marriage
The four of these characters deserve each other and i don't believe that getting married is the right decision. But maybe it is if the writer can give us some more exciting moments. Thanks for your good work
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