If they don't have balls to post with names, they shouldn't post at all! Btw, LitErotica is not about perfect grammar, but about perfect story. So fuck you again anonymous selfappointed grammar/language police...
Like masterslave00 said, this site is about very erotic stories, which your story was. If you care about anonymous' criticism, you can have people edit for you. But typos and grammatical mistakes are kind of expected when you are writing with a brain full of lust.
Very hot first story, I hope you write more!
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Anonymous11/19/13
Grammar on Literotica
I can kind of understand what Satyr81 is saying about not worrying about spelling when you have a brain full of lust, but writers should at least have the decency to go back and double-check their work, or at least have someone check it FOR them. The story is very good, I will admit, but simple things like spelling errors can confuse the reader. I'm not saying that happens to every reader, but the author should at least be aware that there are people like that on here.
Also, just because a person posts an anonymous comment, that doesn't mean they can't be insightful.
English
Waste band?
I stopped reading when I reached that. There is no excuse for such abuse of language.
Fuck anonymous posters
If they don't have balls to post with names, they shouldn't post at all! Btw, LitErotica is not about perfect grammar, but about perfect story. So fuck you again anonymous selfappointed grammar/language police...
Very Hot
Like masterslave00 said, this site is about very erotic stories, which your story was. If you care about anonymous' criticism, you can have people edit for you. But typos and grammatical mistakes are kind of expected when you are writing with a brain full of lust.
Very hot first story, I hope you write more!
Grammar on Literotica
I can kind of understand what Satyr81 is saying about not worrying about spelling when you have a brain full of lust, but writers should at least have the decency to go back and double-check their work, or at least have someone check it FOR them. The story is very good, I will admit, but simple things like spelling errors can confuse the reader. I'm not saying that happens to every reader, but the author should at least be aware that there are people like that on here.
Also, just because a person posts an anonymous comment, that doesn't mean they can't be insightful.
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