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All Comments on 'Taking The Boss'

by todski28

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molineuxmolineuxover 10 years ago
well -

the final lines surely fifnish your poem off fantastically!

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
very nice tod

(disclaimer) would not change a word, but, I might change some EOL choices by rearranging without disturbing the sequential order. top marks nice close.

erectus123erectus123over 10 years ago
terrific

sensuality and strongly erotic

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