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Taking The Boss

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by Anonymous

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by molineux08/25/13

well -

the final lines surely fifnish your poem off fantastically!

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by HarryHill08/25/13

very nice tod

(disclaimer) would not change a word, but, I might change some EOL choices by rearranging without disturbing the sequential order. top marks nice close.

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by erectus12308/26/13

terrific

sensuality and strongly erotic

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