OK .. so I read this in a bar while a little high on 'Newcastle brown ale.' What a story, I was chuckling and laughing so much! Very good! Thank you so much!
I've been on dinner dates like this before...... and......
Wow, what a great story and what an imagination Wayne has! SJP you are the best at letting us learn about the characters in your chapters. Detailed creativity that leaves us desiring the next entry - will Wayne succeed or will Susan give in, something tells me Susan goes into the house with Wayne having a premature ejaculation all over the dash of his precious Honda... time will tell. Looking forward to more. :) jaybird
This is the first story of yours I've read. I love the build up and how you've portrayed the male character's emotions and anticipation. I'm very curious to learn how this story plays out; I'm enjoying this. I almost feel sorry for this guy.
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Walter Mitty Type Guy Had Me Laughing!
OK .. so I read this in a bar while a little high on 'Newcastle brown ale.' What a story, I was chuckling and laughing so much! Very good! Thank you so much!
You are a terrible tease.
But that is what makes so many of your stories so much fun to read.
I've been on dinner dates like this before...... and......
Wow, what a great story and what an imagination Wayne has! SJP you are the best at letting us learn about the characters in your chapters. Detailed creativity that leaves us desiring the next entry - will Wayne succeed or will Susan give in, something tells me Susan goes into the house with Wayne having a premature ejaculation all over the dash of his precious Honda... time will tell. Looking forward to more. :) jaybird
Great build up
This is the first story of yours I've read. I love the build up and how you've portrayed the male character's emotions and anticipation. I'm very curious to learn how this story plays out; I'm enjoying this. I almost feel sorry for this guy.
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