All Comments on 'Poolside Fun with Grandma and Aunt'

Aunt T, Grandma K, and cousin G? Give them names. this was absolutely ridiculous. you've left me no choice, 1*.

I gave you a one, just to counter Ebolaone's vote.

I really hate it when someone like Ebolaone bitches about people who don't write. Who gives a fuck? What a twat.

I agree with mschack. The letter aliases give it an unnecessary spycraft feel. Why not just give them real names?

one star

Not a bad concept but please get it proofread! You say "my aunt's house" four times in the first (short) paragraph, even twice in one sentance,

Complete garbage, the only positive is that it's short.

You have good ideas. It is good when older female family members recognize young guys needs and help out.

what a load of crap

It had potential, but fell way short. No real buildup.

Felt like it was written by a 13 yr old.