All Comments on 'Summer Sitter'

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looking4itlooking4itover 10 years ago

Quite the little Peyton Place eh? Need a core card to see who is fucking who because apparently they don't all know for sure either.

DunaDunaover 10 years ago
In medias res

In medias res is not good everytime method for more charcters story. A little longer story plot could help understand better who is who. It was a little disturbing writting.........BTW I know a married pair, who live happy life and they were step siblings...........

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
very good

I would love more loving wives stories from you! *****

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Clever

What a hoot. At least one more twist than I anticipated. Best of luck in the contest.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Well...

The reader either has to dislike everyone (maybe just half-dislike Troy/Tony, so far), or like 'em all! I think I'll dislike the (post-pubertal) lot of them!

patientleepatientleeover 10 years ago
Didn't see that coming!

I love a twist at the end of a story.

cindylynn34cindylynn34about 9 years ago
pretty wild stuff

good thing the youngest boy is excited about staying in the basement all night by himself because he sure is going to get to..

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Fun Read****

I like you style. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
It's Rare I'm Surprised at the End

I was this time. Nice job. 5 stars!

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Nothing good in cuckold tag story. A *2.

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