by 4glory6
Quite the little Peyton Place eh? Need a core card to see who is fucking who because apparently they don't all know for sure either.
In medias res is not good everytime method for more charcters story. A little longer story plot could help understand better who is who. It was a little disturbing writting.........BTW I know a married pair, who live happy life and they were step siblings...........
What a hoot. At least one more twist than I anticipated. Best of luck in the contest.
The reader either has to dislike everyone (maybe just half-dislike Troy/Tony, so far), or like 'em all! I think I'll dislike the (post-pubertal) lot of them!
good thing the youngest boy is excited about staying in the basement all night by himself because he sure is going to get to..