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The Adventures of Futa-Girl 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/02/13

One page

What's with all the one page stories? The writing is okay but it feels rushed because it's only one page.

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by Themaskedman09/02/13

Loved it!

My only wish is that the stories were a little longer. I feel like you have the talent to create something with a little more suspense both action wise and sexually. Still a great read though

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by Anonymous09/02/13

story length

I think you shouldn't change the length of the chapters. Great job!

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